ok im scared to post this but here i go......
ugh question marks
come on :p
yeaaa
Derp :P
no derp
this is the first part of a book im writing.
ok :p
ok..
POST
i did its up there... whata you think?
oh i didnt see
i cant see it... :OL
?
me too i see nothing
oh yea
ok now i can see
ugh i hate question marks
:DDD
its goooooooooooooooooooooooood
i read fast.
Lisa stumbled -- running -- deeper and deeper into the forest. The scene she just experienced flashed in her mind. Tears streamed down her face -- blurring her vision. She slowed her pace to avoid falling. She came to a clearing and wiped the tears from her eyes. She had to clear her head and focus on surviving her first night out here in the woods. She had a small pack she had stored for a situation like this. It contained a bow and quiver, a long dagger, a torch and matches, and a bedroll attached to the bottom among a few other essentials. Lisa came upon a cave in the clearing but she sensed something strange. As she inched towards the cave something finally clicked... smoke. There was the smell of smoke lingering in the air. She drew her dagger and crept ever closer to the entrance. She looked around the edge of the cave and dropped her dagger and the sand-covered floor. Someone was leaning against the back corner of the wall. He seemed to be unconscious. He had a blood soaked bandage on his right calf and his left hand was wrapped. A fire was smoldering the entrance. Lisa lit a match and got the fire raging again. The nights here were very cold so she went to collect more firewood. When she returned she knelt next to the stranger and undid the bandage on his leg. She put some homemade ointment on the wound and put a fresh bandage on. As she threw the old bandage in the flames the stranger began to stir. She scrambled backwards, dagger in hand. Orion slowly opened his eyes trying to gather his surroundings. He saw Lisa and panicked. He forgot his injured leg and tried to get up, only to fall back down in pain. Lisa let her dagger fall to the ground and knelt next to Orion she grasped for her pack and unclipped her bedroll. She laid his head on the bedroll and tried to ease his pain. "Why? You aren't... going to.... to hurt me?" Orion struggled to say. Lisa smiled,"No" she said softly.
I LIKE THE STORY
me tooooooooooooooooo
there better.... wait you guys really like it?
CAN I BE IN THE STORY JK JK JK
lol so many people are viewing
YES WE LOOVE IT
you not teasing right? not trying to protect my feelings?
NOOOOO
I like it :)
NEVER
SO GOOD
You're good at creating an atmosphere
NIGH ITS GRAT I EVEN WANN BE IN IT
YUP :P
WHAT NICK SAID
wow guys... i didn't think it was THAT good... i mean i thought it was ok but just... wow thank you guys so much!
NO PROBLEM ALIEEN ;p
i have more do you want to keep reading?
u need to have more self esteem alieen ur amazing
foreeal
sure why not
I just have one Q whats the storys name and whats it about?
its a fantasy called Secrets of the Shadow realm..... it wasn't supposed to have romance but it just turned out that way.... i havent got any musshy stuff though......
Good keep it fantasy i hate romance :p
i cant tell you what kinda romance though in case you want a spolier....
:p
Story sounds cool may i offer to throw in my imagination at no expence?
HEY I WANNA MEDALL
no question marks!!!! why?!?!!?!?!?!!
ok i give up
what?
thats the first chapter..... open it up
Not everyone likes questions, that is fine.
OMG this is amazing @Alieen
wow. people need to stop comlimenting me
:/
complimenting
ok its good
thats an Amazing Story !!! Keep writing it, I want to read more :) !!! WRITE ON !!!
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