Question

what do you guys think about my song that I wrote for someone I really care about

Answer 1

Verse 1)

The love is so strong, it’s unbreakable,
Anyone or anything tries to destroy us, but where UN faceable,
The bond is so great,
We live life together forever, that’s our fate,
He makes me happy,
Puts a smile on my face,
He loves me for who I am, even when everyone thinks in a head case,
The emotions are brought up,
To have his heart is true love,
That’s the moment I know no one will be above,
He means the world to me,
Living together for a lifetime to be,
There is so much love its clear for everyone to see,
cuz to me feeling complete,
(Chorus)

Oh no my heart just skipped a beat
Can it be he just swept me off my feet
Nothing in this world could compare
To the love that me and him share
He’s my Romeo I’m is Juliet
We fit together, No one compares to that
I never thought that I could fall in love before
He is the main key.

(Verse 2)

Oh no my heart just skipped a beat
Can it be he just swept me off my feet
Nothing in this world could compare
To the love that me and him share
He’s my Romeo I’m is Juliet
We fit together, No one compares to that
I never thought that I could fall in love before
But now here I am,
Standing here with the perfect man,
He really treats me right,
Always walking walking' with me through the night,
He’s the one I need
And the one who makes me breathe
(Chorus)

Oh no my heart just skipped a beat
Can it be he just swept me off my feet
Nothing in this world could compare
To the love that me and him share
He’s my Romeo
I’m is Juliet
We fit together, No one compares to that
I never thought that I could fall in love before
He is the main key.
(Verse 3)

He fills my heart with ease,
It was love at first sight,
Met him in the afternoon,
Fell in love by night,
Everything was just right,
It was special,
It was nice,
I love him,
And I’ll say it twice,
He’s amazing,
He has my heart steady racing,
We will beat all these things we will be facing,
He makes me laugh,
Makes me forget about my past,
Forget about all the bad memories,
Heal it with a cast,
Its love that we accomplished,
And that’s all we need,
Forever,
His heart is mine to keep.

Answer 2

its good

Answer 3

i like it.