Question

my world
my world is crashing down
nothing i can do about it
i bulid it back up and it falls once more
it seems to fall be i have no lover
no life
but yet i still seem to walk up every single day think today is going to be different
but its not its worst than they day before
but i still seem to keep a smile when im talking to u or just thinking about u
and if i could change they way i feel
i would do it in a heart beat because i wanna be happy not sad all the time
but life is hard and we can only make it better not worst
so i have made my life better by forgetting about love and heart break
so yea now im happy almost all of the time
but i have rose about my world that before has crashed down every time i have tried to build it back up so yea im happy now
i love life
my world is no longer crashing down

Answer 1

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Answer 2

Great work

Answer 3

this is FLIPPING awesome

Answer 4

thanks i wrote this bc i want people to know im okay

Answer 5

love you sis!!!

Answer 6

love u too we are so much alike

Answer 7

WOOW its great

Answer 8

thank u

Answer 9

np

Answer 10

can u tell em if this would be a great story idea ????

Answer 11

@jordanloveangel

Answer 12

I think that I am going to write about a teenager who has came a crossed a hidden passageway that enters into a world of horror and crime based on a death of a small willow flower and what has caused a flower with this power to open a portal of hell

Answer 13

yes its a great story idea

Answer 14

what about that one

Answer 15

I think that I am going to write about a teenager who has came a crossed a hidden passageway that enters into a world of horror and crime based on a death of a small willow flower and what has caused a flower with this power to open a portal of hell

Answer 16

@jordanloveangel

Answer 17

@Destinycholie read my profile picture

Answer 18

awww

Answer 19

great story :D

Answer 20

thank u

Answer 21

I really like it. Brilliant. C:

Answer 22

What a wonderful freestyle poem! It has a lot of meaning behind your powerful and encouraging words! Please post more! I would love to read more of your work! @makaylaTracy

Answer 23

okay i will tag u to all of my other work that is on here @Clalgee

Answer 24

i tagged tu to some of the many poems i have wrote and posted on here i hope u like them too @Clalgee

Answer 25

@southmini

Answer 26

@makaylatracy Thank you so much for tagging me. I really enjoyed reading all of your poems. You are a truly gifted writer. :)

Answer 27

thank you to everyone who has liked my writings i love getting feed back from my peers