Question

new song feedback plz




"BAD DREAM"


i can run but i cant hide
the dark is my Allie
i wear black like the dead.
Could it be im in a dream of my own
i feel no pain i see the future
i dont feel my soul
im like a numb
person and the devil
is in their with me feeding off my soul but i dont feel it
i might never wake oh
my life will be over in a blink of a eye,
i don know where to go in this lost dream
of mine.


all i see is fog and darkness my Allie
i might be able to hide but could it be
just a bad dream

im so lost in this world i created
im like a dead person
no one know me
could it be im dead
non living any more
i start to see light no i hate the light
i could run but not hide

Answer 1

hold on im not done yet

Answer 2

I like it!!!!!!!!!

Answer 3

@xo.minnie.xox its finished now

Answer 4

@Angel_Bear19 @CallMeKiki @brittney_abshire @alesia/bailey @Mesopretty @quin100

Answer 5

what do you guys think

Answer 6

@SaltLife23

Answer 7

I like it :)

Answer 8

thx

Answer 9

its awesome bro good work

Answer 10

thx

Answer 11

heres my other songs http://openstudy.com/updates/54c28c1ce4b0d372e15cb37b

Answer 12

this i awesome

Answer 13

dark has an erie feeling to it. good job :)

Answer 14

thx

Answer 15

Sounds GREATLY AWESOMLY FANTASTIC !!!
Ur ok though ?
lol

Answer 16

WOW fantastic I like the emotion u put into it good work!!

Answer 17

dude have u ever thought of being a professional song writer cause u need to be

Answer 18

OMG he does I love all ur songs @andrewhaze

Answer 19

He's ok though, right people ?

Answer 20

thx guys

Answer 21

ur welcome but are u okay?

Answer 22

what do you mean ok little confused

Answer 23

well ur song it sounds like u wrote it because something happened so im just asking if ur okay.

Answer 24

oh yea im ok

Answer 25

thats great! I hope to see more songs from u ur a fantastic writer!

Answer 26

im in this game to win
you got me pinned down to the ground
i get back up i never give up
to keep my luck
and im so fuked
yo call me your lil bish
i gotta stay strong
im in the forgotten
but im still here not giving up


im ignored what have i done
im faded to gray
ill have to pay
all the way i sit in this game
thats so lame
i wanna join the hall of fame
i came in this game lookin strong
i dont want to enter the light
so i fight
with one last night
i might win i will not lose
this world will fall down to hell
if i dont fight i get up strong


i find my way this horizon
i see far and clear could it be i have won
this other world will be just a glitch
that has been forgotten like it was never their
i finally get see the world my world
i..i finally see it after years and years
of waiting and fighting im no longer faded to gray
and wont have to pay

Answer 27

OMG FANTASTIC /AMAZING you are such a good writer good job!!!!

Answer 28

@_tyannaj_

Answer 29

Thats Really Awesome dude

Keep writing and venting ur feelings so you don't hold it all in and explode because you didn't express yourself, seriously
WRITE ON

Answer 30

.@Angel_Bear19 @CallMeKiki @brittney_abshire @alesia/bailey @Mesopretty

Answer 31

@Angel_Bear19

Answer 32

@robzilla420u-fig

Answer 33

Love it. I love everything you've done so far. So much talent!

Answer 34

@Nahstya

Answer 35

thx @CallMeKiki

Answer 36

@Jadeishere

Answer 37

@xo.minnie.xox

Answer 38

dude those lyrics sound like something Megadeth or Tool or Breaking Benjamin would write............................pure badasss \m/

Answer 39

no their mine @robzilla420u-fig but i like megadeath

Answer 40

I know but the genre of it sounds similar as in like Dark and Grunge kind of music but its badasss dude and hells yea megadeth is the shat lol

Answer 41

oh lol

Answer 42

Breaking Benjamin! It's hard to find people who actually know them.

Answer 43

lol ik

Answer 44

their ok i say anyway

Answer 45

omg your writing songs like u belong in a badazz band. your songs are amazing!!!!!!!!! it would be totally awesome if u had your own band thn it would be popular like pierce the viel and sleepin with sirens thn i would make it my profile pic. lmoa but its really good lookin forward to hear more from u.

Answer 46

im under all this pain my
family thinks its just one of my games
im burning down in flames
i..im tryin to survive
while im still alive i strive
and strive but its just not enough
im so full of this stuff
im no longer tough


im up against the wall while
their tryin to make me fall
im so torn
i just stepped on a thorn
but thats no pain to me
if you can see
i cut with a key
im in this world
to live i try its a challenge
that i can take
just through me in the oven to bake


i have no fate i just get hate
its to late to say good bye
cause i just wanna die
and fly in the sky
i go down in pain with blood stains
i have lost and that will cost
its like im in a horror story
that wants me in

Answer 47

Thats KILLER !!! That's why Expressing Yourself is so Beneficial for people because you get to VENT instead of bottling up your emotions and Exploding one day because you never Expressed how you Felt. Keep Writing :)
-W-R-I-T-E - - O-N- !!!

Answer 48

you did a great job i love the emotion