could i get feedback on my poem ;) Music When Soft Voices Die Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory— Odours, when sweet violets sicken, Live within the sense they quicken. Rose leaves, when the rose is dead, Are heaped for the belovèd's bed; And so thy thoughts, when thou art gone, Love itself shall slumber on.
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Dang man, That's like . . . REALLY GREAT !!! For Real ! I REALLY LOVE THAT !!! !!! !!! !!!
thnx alot
wow i didnt know you could write like that!
U really live in Hawaii ? And play Uke ?
heres a funny one : way down south where banannas grow, a grasshopper stepped on an elephants toe. the elephant said, with tears in his eyes, pick on someone your one size yes i live in hawaii and play uke. if fact we own an uke company
For real ? I'm Hawaiian/Chinese/Irish and play Uke, Guitar, Elec Viola, and Piano . . . Weird ^_^
theres a video of me on youtube playing uke when i wuz 6. if u see da 3 year old girl laguhing next to me, dats crazychickengril123. the vid ill give u the name in a sec
cool :)
Ukulele kid 6 years old (Lucky Bonanno) ~ C is for Cookie
copy paste that
and look it up
Never really a fan of poetry, but still good!
yeah..
wow youre amazing!!
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