Question

feedback for my poem appreciated :)

Answer 1

Life is but a Dream

A boat, beneath a sunny sky
Lingering onward dreamily
In an evening of July

Children three that nestle near,
Eager eye and willing ear,
Pleased a simple tale to hear

Long has paled that sunny sky;
Echoes fade and memories die;
Autumn frosts have slain July.

Still she haunts me, phantomwise,
Alice moving under skies
Never seen by waking eyes.

Children yet, the tale to hear,
Eager eye and willing ear,
Lovingly shall nestle near.

In a Wonderland they lie,
Dreaming as the days go by,
Dreaming as the summers die;

Ever drifting down the stream
Lingering in the golden gleam
Life, what is it but a dream?

Answer 2

@Nahstya @poopsiedoodle @RAINIAR

Answer 3

That is really Really COOL !!! You've got a Talent for this ^_^ Stick with it

Answer 4

thnx :))

Answer 5

^_^

Answer 6

:) good job :^)

Answer 7

GREAT JOB! BETTER THAN MY POEM!

Answer 8

WAY BETTER THAN THIS!




By @crazychickengirl123


old snow in yard
sun shines on the side walk
trees wave in the breeze
the grass is so green
i love the world

Answer 9

eh?!

Answer 10

nice. @RAINIAR this is my sister

Answer 11

YEP!

Answer 12

THE SIS IS HERE!

Answer 13

lol

Answer 14

it says she's 15, r y'all that close?

Answer 15

yes

Answer 16

That's sweet, I've got a brother and we're 19 months apart but we're like twins, people get us confused but we look nothing alike, at least thats what we think lol

Answer 17

my computer keeps slowing up, delayed response

Answer 18

slowing up?

Answer 19

It keeps being really slow, then freezing, then just making me look at the frozen screen for like 2 minutes at a time. Hate it when that happens. But i also ave like 20 windows open so maybe thats the problem . . . probably lol

Answer 20

;^(

Answer 21

@Haichi like it?

Answer 22

Ches! Very Talented way of expressing ur feels and emotions

Answer 23

thnx.. but 'Ches'?

Answer 24

My friend always says "ches" It is his way of saying yes and I think it is funny

Answer 25

Ur sister's really great at writing and it's only her first day as a poet ?

Answer 26

no shes been writin for a bit

Answer 27

Oh she's really fantastic

Answer 28

;D