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OpenStudy (anonymous):

Which error in the sentence should be corrected while revising? The ship was enormous, its mast was almost 40 feet high. A)run-on sentence B)repetition of ideas C)unclear meaning D)wordiness

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Its not a run-on because a Run-on sentence is an independent clause...

OpenStudy (anonymous):

i Kinda Think Its Wordiness But I Dont Know And Thanks

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I'm thinking it's a repetition of ideas because you're telling the reader TWICE that the ship is big. But, I may be wrong.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

The answer is D. It is not a repetition of ideas because you're telling the reader the exact detail to help them grasp the concept.

OpenStudy (kohai):

Please close the question if you no longer need help :)

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