Which sentence contains an inappropriate shift in tense?

A.
Has Eric seen the puppies, or are you saving them for a surprise?

B.
As the wagon was rolling down the hill, a rear wheel breaks, and Tom yells, "Whoa!

C.
Before you go out, will you read a story to your sister?

Question

Which sentence contains an inappropriate shift in tense?	
 
 A.
Has Eric seen the puppies, or are you saving them for a surprise?
 
 B.
As the wagon was rolling down the hill, a rear wheel breaks, and Tom yells, "Whoa!
 
 C.
Before you go out, will you read a story to your sister?

anonymous · Answer

B

jgirl128 · Answer

identifying an inappropriate shift in tense is all about editing. you have to eliminate some words (that arent necessary) but you have to make sure the verb tense remains. I'm pretty sure it's B.

jgirl128 · Answer

oops, sorry. but yeah, you got it