Question

My poem.

Answer 1

Tic-tock clock
The clock is ticking for you
Cause the love you said you'd give
Came up way past due

So dance to the clock-rock
Stay on the floor
Cause when the ticks, turn to tocks
I'll be knocking at your door

Answer 2

Hello! Before you post anymore.. You should really post this in the Writing section. Not the Feedback.
Thanks!
Void!~

Answer 3

cool poem @Raphaelcbm! :)

Answer 4

Thanks, head over here...

http://openstudy.com/study#/updates/54ccf56de4b0fa2e6be36fdd