my best friend made a song and wants some feed back its try me remix

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my best friend made a song and wants some feed back  its try me remix

anonymous · Answer

she isnt done but this what she got so far and if anyone has any ideas on how to do verse to she would appreciate it

anonymous · Answer

Chorus [2]
Let a feather try me, try me
 I'm a get her whole mothaflutterin' family
 And I sswear to  god I aint playin 
 flutter with my man and imma come find ya
	Verse 1
feather I got a choppa nd a 4-4
Turn yo retriceinto a damn zombie
Tell me ready im comin
I really mean it cuz I aint no 4
Got asap jay comin wit  me 
Mine as well   jus  bring my whole hood
flutter was yhu sayin feather my hood love me
Rip   my sleek-feathered ones that  has died this week
I really mean cuz I hate that yall  are gone
Neva been book smart but im street smart
Love smoking weed anad popin pills
Catch me at da trap like once week
I really hate featheres that think yall  the pellet
Wanna run your mouf on da intanet 
	Chorus[2]
Let a feather try me, try me
 I'm a get her whole mothaflutterin' family
 And I sswear to  god I aint playin 
 flutter with my man and imma come find ya