so here's my story
i got my type
tattoos and skinny jeans
black boots and piercings
a public enemy
not Cinderella
still got my shoes
I like the animal the supernatural
maybe im crazy but
if you were Dracula
I'd be letting you take that bite
hot and hazardous
like playing with dynamite
yeah i want dracula
forever be young and wild
dark and dangerous
yeah i love i love
the tragically beautiful

still needs work but watcha think?

Question

so here's my story 
i got my type
tattoos and skinny jeans
black boots and piercings
a public enemy 
not Cinderella
still got my shoes 
I like the animal the supernatural  
maybe im crazy but
if you were Dracula
I'd be letting you take that bite 
hot and hazardous
like playing with dynamite
yeah i want dracula 
forever be young and wild
dark and dangerous
yeah i love i love
the tragically beautiful      



still needs work but watcha think?

anonymous · Answer

Eh, needs punctuation, but good.("

anonymous · Answer

xD i was in a rush.

anonymous · Answer

um i did

anonymous · Answer

huh?

anonymous · Answer

the chick deleted her comment.

anonymous · Answer

oooo

quin100 · Answer

It need punctuation but other then that good job I really like it:D

clalgee · Answer

Wow.. This is very interesting! I completely enjoyed reading it. I love how you compared the person to Dracula. Most importantly, I love how you used the characteristics from Dracula and used them to compare with the person. One question, is this a poem or a song?

anonymous · Answer

That's COOL & I LOVE the Visuals and SWEET WORDS :D

elonasushchik · Answer

Very Nice. I love the lyrics!! Goood Job @sahgbdashfyehsadsadsa

anonymous · Answer

hmm its great but needs a little rhyme