How does this sound about The-Bat-Poet I need a Introdution-Thisis Statement- 3 bodys-and Concluson

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Literature Unit 13 
   The Story The-Bat-Poet by Randall Jarrell is a great story about a little light brown bat that goes around and writes poetry about the other animals in the yard and most of them like the poems.

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@TheSmartOne

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@LeeEtchison

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How dose it sound for the Intro?

anonymous · Answer

or is that a thisis?

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Is it supposed to be an informative essay?

anonymous · Answer

Let me check

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It is a Litteraty essay

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https://sas.elluminate.com/site/external/jwsdetect/playback.jnlp?psid=2015-02-03.1200.M.ECAE9960F22ED438BE8DBAEB0B4F48.vcr&sid=559 to see what my teacher is talking about.

thesmartone · Answer

I never read the story.. :/

anonymous · Answer

xD

thesmartone · Answer

But I can fix the grammar mistakes :P

story doesn't need to be capital.
Keep the title name in " "
No need for "that" in the middle of the sentence

The story "The-Bat-Poet" by Randall Jarrell is a great story about a little light brown bat goes around and writes poetry about the other animals in the yard and most of them like the poems.

anonymous · Answer

The "that"is needed, silly...

anonymous · Answer

:P not really.

anonymous · Answer

The story "The Bat Poet" by Randall Jarrell is a great story about a little light brown bat who goes around and writes poetry about the other animals in the yard, and most of them like the poems.

thesmartone · Answer

I never got to complete it because then firefox just shut down on me...
But amazingly and luckily it actually submitted what I had wrotten! xD

anonymous · Answer

lol

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Now i need a Introdution Supporting Paragraphs and a Conclusion XD

anonymous · Answer

Well now i know how to make a essay so :P this is going to be long.

anonymous · Answer

ok i have the introdution how dose it sound?                 “The Bat Poet” is a story about a bat that makes poetry about animals in the yard, He first learns about poetry from The Mockingbird in the story who sings poetry about other animals.    The story “The-Bat-Poet” by Randall Jarrell is a great story about a little light brown bat that goes around and writes poetry about the other animals in the yard, and most of them like the poems.

anonymous · Answer

it seems weird because both the intro and the theisis statement sound the same. i dont know if i should change the way it is stated or keep it.

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@Whitemonsterbunny17