Question

Is this a good speech

Answer 1

My topic is how to make a awesome birthday party. This is a question that runs through all lot of peoples mind. To make a friend or kid feel like they are the big person. Sounds like fun!!!
First decided who your friend or kid is. Think about what their favorite color and things they like to watch. After you do that you could hang streamers from the walls and add some things from the favorite thing to watch.
Secondly decided on food. Ask your self if they like chocolate,vanilla, or strawberry. You must be careful and ask the people who are coming what they are allergic to. For the dinner ask yourself what is the birthday person's favorite food and drink. Don’t forget the people coming. You can get multiple drinks for everyone.
Lastly but least make the party fun. Add games and activities that will entertain everyone. You can hire a princess or pay a band to come in and play. Make sure to include stuff for all age groups (if different ages coming). You could also go to an amusement park or go on a vacation somewhere the birthday person wants to go.
How to make a awesome birthday party? A question that runs through peoples mind can be solved easily. Remember that a birthday is something special and should be made special for that special person.

Answer 2

@Directrix plz help

Answer 3

it is my first time and i have to present it in the front of class

Answer 4

do u think it is good

Answer 5

No, it's not good. it needs to be revised alot

Answer 6

i know i just need to know if it sounds good not spelling

Answer 7

but on what be specific plz

Answer 8

well besides that yes its a pretty good speech. simple and too the point

Answer 9

is the only thing spelling

Answer 10

yes and the essay itself can be revised

Answer 11

my teacher says i must make cards with key words for when i present it but what should they have on them

Answer 12

My topic is how to make a awesome birthday party for a kid.
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This is a question that runs through a lot of peoples minds. How too make a kid feel like he is the big person.

First, consider who the kid is. Think about what his favorite color is and things he likes to watch. After you do that, you could hang streamers from the walls and add some things from the favorite thing to watch.

Secondly, decide on food. Ask yourself if the kid likes chocolate, vanilla, or strawberry flavor. You must be careful and ask the people who are coming to what foods they are allergic. For the dinner, ask yourself what is the birthday person's favorite food and drink are.

Don’t forget the people coming. You can get multiple drinks for everyone.

Lastly, make the party fun. Add games and activities that will entertain everyone. You can hire a princess or pay a band to come in and play. Make sure to include activities for all age groups (if different ages coming). You could also go to an amusement park or go on a vacation somewhere the birthday person wants to go.

How to make a awesome birthday party? A universal question that runs through peoples minds can be solved easily. Remember that a birthday is something special and should be made special for that special kid.
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Narrow the topic to a kid's party. Adults are kids at heart.
Check to see if this needs an apostrophe: peoples
What do you mean by "things" in "things he likes"
Be more specific about "the favorite thing "
Thing does not convey meaning.

Answer 13

omg thank u

Answer 14

The word "thing" needs to be replaced by whatever you mean by thing.

Answer 15

And, this line might as well be deleted because it is redundant. In my first review, I see that it is illogically placed in the essay.

>> Don’t forget the people coming. You can get multiple drinks for everyone.
Does not add anything new.

I will help someone with a math problem while you make your edits on my edit.

Then, we'll see how that looks.

Answer 16

@kristinak Thanks for your suggestions and comments. Come back in a few minutes and critique Bunny's revisions.

Answer 17

aMy topic is how to make a awesome birthday party for a kid. This is a question that runs through many peoples minds. How to make a kid feel like he/she is the big person for the day.

First, consider who the kid is. Think about what his favorite color is and things he likes to watch. After you do that, you could hang streamers from the walls and add some things from their favorite movie or T.V. show.

Secondly, decide on food. Ask yourself if the kid likes chocolate, vanilla, or strawberry flavor. You must be careful and ask the guest what foods they are allergic too. For the dinner, ask yourself what is their favorite food and drink are. Don’t forget the people coming. You can get multiple types of drinks and food for everyone.

Lastly, make the party fun. Add games and activities that will entertain everyone. You can hire a princess or pay a band to stop by and play. Make sure to include activities for all age groups (if different age groups are coming). You could also go to an amusement park or go on a vacation somewhere they want to go.

How to make a awesome birthday party? A universal question that runs through peoples minds can be solved easily. Remember that a birthday is something special and should be made special for that special kid. This is something can be solved easily and is a lot of fun.

Answer 18

opps take out the a in the first sentence

Answer 19

better

Answer 20

how do i make cards to remember this without putting the whole speech on the card

Answer 21

you make bullet points of the main topic of each paragraph

Answer 22

ok thnx

Answer 23

now for the speech

Answer 24

@Directrix and @kristinak how does it sound now

Answer 25

things he likes to watch

What does "things" mean in this context?

Television, a dog running down the street, clowns at the circus,

Answer 26

meant to put T.V show or movie

Answer 27

i think it is good now

Answer 28

am i right?

Answer 29

plz tell me

Answer 30

like directrix said don't use generic words like things or stuff

Answer 31

and put "How to make an awesome birthday party?" is a universal question .....

Answer 32

don't know if you put that for time's sake

Answer 33

ok

Answer 34

In the last sentence "something" could be replaced with "a problem" or so

Answer 35

again, no generic words

Answer 36

so its good right

Answer 37

Yep.

Answer 38

My topic is how to make a awesome birthday party for a kid.

This is a question that runs through many peoples minds. How to make a kid feel like he or she is the big person for the day. First, consider who the kid is. Think about what his favorite color is and T.V. shows and movies he likes to watch. After you do that, you could hang streamers from the walls and add some things from his favorite movie or television show.

Secondly, decide on food. Ask yourself if the kid likes chocolate, vanilla, or strawberry flavored ice cream. For the dinner, ask yourself what the favorite foods and drinks of the guests are, and choose a menu that the birthday kid and the guests like.

Make the party fun for the birthday kid. Be sure to include activities for all age groups. Pick games and activities that will entertain everyone. You can hire a clown or pay a band to stop by and make music. You could also go to an amusement park or go on a road trip somewhere everyone wants to go.

How to make a awesome birthday party? A universal question that runs through peoples minds can be solved easily. Remember that a birthday is something special and should be made special for that special kid. This is something can be solved easily by planning and is a lot of memorable fun.

Answer 39

Just keep writing. That's what helped me a whole lot. Experience.

Answer 40

ok so make those last fixer upers and its good

Answer 41

i got to be done know

Answer 42

Make your note card bullet points as @kristinak said.

Number the note cards so that if you drop them, you can easily get them in order.

Write on the front of the cards only.

Answer 43

Look at the audience when you speak.

Not just those at the front but everyone.

Answer 44

ok thnx now how to give the medal??

Answer 45

hard choice u were both so helpful

Answer 46

any suggestions

Answer 47

i wish i can give u both a medal

Answer 48

well all of u did

Answer 49

:)

Answer 50

bye