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anonymous · Answer

Whats up?

peterg2001 · Answer

Using the information given, write a good lead sentence for a possible new article.

A picnic is going to take place. The picnic is sponsored by the Mayville Country Club. The picnic will be held in the pasture by the golf course. It will be on Saturday, May 5, at noon. Tickets can be purchased. Admission is $1.50 per person. The picnic will be a benefit. Proceeds from ticket sales will go to the Mayville Children's Home.

peterg2001 · Answer

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anonymous · Answer

Hold on bruh. Im thinking

peterg2001 · Answer

@beastieman21

anonymous · Answer

Want to go to an picnic

How does this sound like picnic

Just lead sentences i thought of, you can still continue it on if you like

tjbrew · Answer

How is this...Good Luck!! :)
The Mayville Children's Home is opening doors to the future by maximizing the potential of children and families. Through a wide range of residential and community-based programs, they are able to systematically address family issues and break the generational cycle of child abuse and neglect.

anonymous · Answer

Waaay too long @Tjbrew

tjbrew · Answer

ok then this...The Mayville Children's Home is opening doors to the future by maximizing the potential of children and families.

anonymous · Answer

I do not if mine helped or not

anonymous · Answer

Because i try to make lead sentences short

anonymous · Answer

When lead sentences are not short, there will just be nothing

tjbrew · Answer

or The Mayville Children's Home is opening doors to the future!

anonymous · Answer

No... I think "Mayville Country Club holds a picnic benefit in order to raise money for Mayville childrens home"

tjbrew · Answer

"Mayville Country Club holds a picnic benefit in order to raise money for Mayville children's home"

anonymous · Answer

... @Tjbrew Thats what I just saud

tjbrew · Answer

@ashellyh  Yes but you forgot the apostrophe "s" in children's home, so I corrected it! ;)

anonymous · Answer

-_-... @Tjbrew

tjbrew · Answer

@ashellyh Hahahaha...I don't have a dog in this fight...I was only trying to help! My first one was too long, you were right. After that I think any of them can work.  I like your spin...I guess ultimately peterg2001 will have to figure it out...

anonymous · Answer

@tjbrew 
Lol I wasnt mad. I was kidding. I knew I was right the whole time.

eclipsedstar · Answer

@peterg2001 please close the question when you are finished, thank you! :D