Question

Hey guys! I love writing poetry and I was supposed to write a poem about what I did (riding) Please give me feedback!!!

Answer 1

My trainer wanted me to riding this pony who I have helped train because she's selling him and she wanted some pictures of him jumping big and I said sure because who doesn't want to jump without paying lol. There was a gymnastic set up in the center of ring (4 jumps with 1 stride between each) and it was a big crossrail to another big crossrail to a square 2'6 oxer (what I usually do) to anther bigger oxer then the last oxer kept getting bigger till it was 3 feet wide and 3'3 high! I have never jumped that big so it was awesome!!!

Answer 2

An oxer is two jumps put close together that your horse has to jump over at once

Answer 3

that was amazing

Answer 4

Thanks so much!!

Answer 5

no prob

Answer 6

i like your style of writing

Answer 7

Thanks! I started writing poetry in 3rd grade and this is my favorite way

Answer 8

i like it i started writing a while ago and my writings just seem to get more and more heart filled and depressing but thats just my style of writing tho

Answer 9

oh that's cool though

Answer 10

It's cool how you can put it into writing

Answer 11

I feel when I write this way, I can make it more powerful and make it how I want.

Answer 12

i will tag you to one of mine

Answer 13

Sure.

Answer 14

Too bad my favorite poems were on my old school computer so I can't get them