Question

writing peom for class, need some advise. pleae help

Answer 1

That One Special Night
They kiss in the snow.
On a silent night.
The only thing disturbed is there foot prints in sight.
They walk to the hill, to the only tree in sight.
To make a memory last, with the only things that are right.
They stand close, to keep their warmth.
To bond there love together that one silent night.
They say no words throughout the night.
To bring together the feelings that are right.
She says she will freeze, and he knows she is right.
So he hands over his jacket for the rest of the night.
He doesn’t need clothes to keep him warm,
As long as true love is in sight.
The night seems silent, which doesn’t seem right.
So they look into each other’s eyes, staying quieter than the night.
The night is still young.
Together there right.
They stayed there for hours, till it was late that night.
Till they said there first words, everything was right.
They went their separate ways after that night.
But he still goes back to that hill, for the one perfect sight.
All he remembers under that tree,
For him
For the rest of his life,
It was that one special night

Answer 2

its beautiful.

Answer 3

@k12andstudyislandhelp thank you, i tried my hardest to make the best one i have ever done. i just had regrets of it after it was made. was looking for others opinion.

Answer 4

Ok, That was amazing.

Answer 5

i think i made 2 or 3 before this one but i didn't like them to much, they didn't feel right when reading over them. :)