Question

I'm thinking about writing a few poems...

Answer 1

Beauty, passion, her long red hair
Blue eyes, legs crossed as I saw her standing there
quiet, charming, guys fall down at her feet
silently she does work, making sure its done neat.
Her eye's catch mine, but I look away, my eyes wandering back
but only for her to dismay, I begin to think, of such beauty aware
that I may never, ever get there.
Confession, teaches a lesson of why she's so quiet,
the secrets, yes the secrets, I can tell from her eyes, she yearns
to learn, a new topic, trying to let it go but she knows she can't stop it
Her feelings, she says she's ok, but you know thats its completely the other way
Crystal clear, the flowing tears, she cries silently so nobody can hear
I stay by the corner, and watch her cry there
realizing its not only about the beauty, passion, or her long red hair.

Answer 2

@LeilaJudeh @sleepyhead314 @SaltLife23 @jordanloveangel @ilovewolf @Hotchellerae21 @TheRaggedyDoctor @TheSmartOne @DullJackel09 @pooja195 @Presh08

Answer 3

I like it, although its a bit emotional :( but its awesome <3

Answer 4

Thanks :D

Answer 5

awweeee how cute!

Answer 6

Oh wow that was really cute

Answer 7

Wow, tht was beautiful

Answer 8

Thanks guys xD

Answer 9

@Crissy15 @CausticSyndicalist @Ashleyrh1999 @Angel_Bear19

Answer 10

oh wow great job it very beautiful

Answer 11

cool

Answer 12

wow logan idk u can do something like that its amazing i like it its very beautiful kepp up the good work

Answer 13

Thanks :D

Answer 14

@LyricalDevonne

Answer 15

(This poem is dedicated to I_Always_Smiling)

Answer 16

yeah np

Answer 17

nice bro!

Answer 18

Thanks guys! :D

Answer 19

@kristyn-whitaker @One098 @Jesstho.-. @just_one_last_goodbye @Rainbow_dashie

Answer 20

I loved it, Logan!

Answer 21

Thanks One!

Answer 22

I love it, so beautiful.

Answer 23

Thank you! :3 @Conqueror

Answer 24

wow emotional,very detailed, and words rhyme at the end I can't pull that off never, great job you have me jealous jaja

Answer 25

I was falsely tagged ;-;

Answer 26

Haha, your poems are far better than mine! xD

Answer 27

Looooggggaaaaaannnnn aaaaawwwww

I loved it so much, the words flowed together perfectly and it sounded so sweet.

Wriiittteeee mmmmooorrrreeeee <3333

Answer 28

Thanks (Button nosed Leila) :D

Answer 29

@CallMeKiki @CausticSyndicalist

Answer 30

I clearly state yours are better end of discussion sir.

Answer 31

@I_Always_Smiling

;)

Answer 32

@hysusonic xDDD Thanks Cris

Answer 33

@fallenangelorchid dafuq... i'm not chris

Answer 34

~Facepalm~ I mentioned you purposely x'DDDDDDDDDD

Answer 35

whoops XD

Answer 36

So when's the next one coming!!!?

Answer 37

Oh my God. This is so incredibly awesome. Brilliant!

Answer 38

Soon gimme like 4 minutes xD

Answer 39

XD coming

Answer 40

that fast?
well dang O_O

Answer 41

Coming Soon another poem by Logan

Answer 42

He's that good Kate, they just come ahahahahaha

I wont be here in 4 minutes though so tag mee

I haz to go, bye lovleis

Answer 43

I spelled lovelies wrong >_> Sorry xD

Answer 44

logan i have something for u

Answer 45

~I approach her, and take her into my embrace
stroking her hair gently the while our fingers lace
my shirt gets soaked, but that isn't what matters
she cries out: "It was my fault, when he fell from that ladder."
Her brother suffered from brain injury, and was paralyzed from head down
in his hospital room, comes the sound, the alarm, the beeping, the machine operating
they ran in the room, but it was too late, before this beautiful girl, was the fate,
her brother had committed suicide and she saw nothing but a screen of hate
this beautiful girl had went through alot, she cries daily, just at the thought
I look at the calendar, and looking at the date, the day her brother
ended his life, was sadly, today.~

Answer 46

And thanks Jordan, its amazing!!!

Answer 47

@dejmccray @rebeka

Answer 48

^-^ thx if u want me 2 do more i will

Answer 49

that's great

Answer 50

I don't know how u did it but u actually made me cry which im not surprised but um that is really good logan

Answer 51

@Teddyiswatshecallsme @kristyn-whitaker @One098 @Jesstho.-. @just_one_last_goodbye @Rainbow_dashie @Crissy15 @CausticSyndicalist @Ashleyrh1999 @Angel_Bear19

Answer 52

Thanks xDDD

Answer 53

wow, tht was a sad story. Your gunna make me cry Logan. Awesome story

Answer 54

Thanks :D

Answer 55

@bibby @bohotness

Answer 56

@fallenangelorchid

Answer 57

Awesome!!! Thanks Jordan :D

Answer 58

lol np logan

Answer 59

WOW amazing they are just fantastic good job I hope to see more

Answer 60

wow, so sad :(

Answer 61

Logan. Why did you do this to me. Now I will be sad for the next god damn week!
It was so good though. But gaaaaaah.

Make more. And Im saving the poem.

It was amazing <33

Answer 62

:O
well that was adorable :)

Answer 63

both r relly good

Answer 64

-saves poems- it's just too cute :)

Answer 65

Lmao, thanks kitten xD

Answer 66

lol
You're welcome :p

Answer 67

I'm thinking about making a new one tonight.. not sure though... should I?

Answer 68

@Compassionate

Answer 69

YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 70

I have it as a word file on my desktop xDD


AND YEEEESSSSSS!!!!! DOOOO IITTT.

Im being all nosy hahaha sorrryyyy I got notified that people commented xD

Answer 71

x'DDD Alright

Answer 72

same here
and lol

Answer 73

yayy time for a new one okie i'll be waiting :)

Answer 74

I don't think Im emotionally ready yet xD

Answer 75

Those are both really good.. Amazing actually.. I enjoyed them.. Good job Logan.. Got me to cry actually.

Answer 76

Haha, thanks Jordan <333

Answer 77

Just being honest ^-^

Answer 78

you were suppose to give him hearts back ;) @I_Always_Smiling

Answer 79

Kait, hush xD

Answer 80

Wasn't tagged, but amazing work dude. Keep it up! @fallenangelorchid