Question

who can help me write a love poem?

Answer 1

I can, do you have a rough draft/idea?

Answer 2

do you still need help?

Answer 3

yes I do

Answer 4

okay, so i have a few questions. 1) is it about your love? 2) is it a good love or bad (like it makes you happy or is killing you)

Answer 5

my love and its killing me I don't know how to tell someone that

Answer 6

okay, im gonna think of something and if you have any words you want to use just tell me. ( btw, i can help with the words but the punctuation, commas etc., you may want to check.)

Answer 7

lol thank u so very much!

Answer 8

and one more question, are you a boy or a girl and is the love with a boy or girl?

Answer 9

haha I'm a girl and I love a boy!

Answer 10

okay aha

Answer 11

whenever i see you or touch youor hear your voice or even know you’resomewhere nearby even if icannot see you at the time.It’s not telling you how I feel that scares me it’s what you’ll say back.

Answer 12

wait, so did you guys date yet or are you wanting to tell him that you want to be with him?

Answer 13

we broke up

Answer 14

so you want him back? or was there something you wanted to say? i started part of it and was going to lead into what you said

Answer 15

he cheated on me so I want it to be sad I want him to know how hurt he mad me feel

Answer 16

Love is an ocean. I was drifting in its current. Many men have sailed love's waters but I fell for a certain merchant. It was you... you sold me your sweet talk in exchange for my heart, but who knew things would be so detrimental just from looking at our start.

Answer 17

omg thamk u so much okay and how do I put mine into that?

Answer 18

you can talk about how good your relationship was until he cheated, comparing the good to the bad.. for example: See, our love was like a song.. a dolce (dol che) melody we flowed along and then the key changed and you started to get your notes wrong. Our love was not in unison, it changed into harmony and another girl's notes started to play over me. what i am saying is, you really took a toll on me... Whenever i see you, touch you, hear your voice, or even know you're somewhere near, not telling you how i feel put into my soul, fear.

Answer 19

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Answer 20

wow ur good

Answer 21

lol, thanks :) i do spoken word, write my own songs and really anything but dance lol. i was on cw17 form a performance a fw times andive been on the new with my school choir a few times too so i have dreams of making it big in life one day. first as a musician ( singer, rapper, song writer) and then breaking off into other professions and using the money to help people.

Answer 22

Love is an ocean. I was drifting in its current. Many men have sailed love's waters but I fell for a certain merchant. It was you... you sold me your sweet talk in exchange for my heart, but who knew things would be so detrimental just from looking at our start. our love was like a song.. a dolce (dol che) melody we flowed along and then the key changed and you started to get your notes wrong. Our love was not in unison, it changed into harmony and another girl's notes started to play over me. what i am saying is, you really took a toll on me... Whenever i see you, touch you, hear your voice, or even know you're somewhere near, not telling you how i feel put into my soul, fear.

Answer 23

i just made it up and i really dont mind if you use it cause i dont plan on using it. But incase you arent familiar with some of the terms.. dolce is a musical term meaning sweetly and softly (pronounced dol chAy) unison is together, harmony is basically the opposite. but if you can't use this, the best thing to do when writing poetry or songs is think of how something made you feel. think of the good and bad, find better words to replace some of those emotions and compare the situation to something in your life, something others can relate to, or comparing it to something that others would not think of comparing it to

Answer 24

thank u so very much I love it<3 and r u a boy or a girl?

Answer 25

no problem :) and im a girl (17)

Answer 26

okay well I faned u ur an amazing peom writer ull go far in life.

Answer 27

thanks :) and hey, do you know how to change your pic on here? because i have no idea lol

Answer 28

thanks :) and hey, do you know how to change your pic on here? because i have no idea lol

Answer 29

ya u go to settings and click change photo

Answer 30

okay thanks

Answer 31

YW