Question

Scarlet signs
You sink to me, tonight
About to let everyone down

I let you dangle in your part of town
Found myself yearning for the world she took down

Her winter lives in my blood
I'll make it up to you ( myself ) when I leave this world
But I know like last time I'll be calling your name
After the potions

Senses classified as devotion
I won't fade a day before
My heart is the state of the art

Red scarlet sunshine
Took me by suprise
The moon I once knew has gone far behind
I tend to look away
Now I know where I belong

Answer 1

its good but it needs some punctuation to help with the flow. other than that thought it was perfect