Question

Hey guys I wrote something and was hoping you guys could check it out! I know it's a bit grim and dark, sorry! Thanks so much. ^-^

Answer 1

When she lays awake at night she can't help but think, think about everything that has ever taken place in her life. Now other people would smile at the thought, but her, she cries at the thought. She tenses up, and loses it. While everyone is sleeping she thinks about ways to end it, ways to leave everything and everyone behind. As she closes her eyes she sees the way she wants to leave.. So she gets up and lays her favorite dress out and the necklace her mother bought her when she was younger, and goes to the bathroom. She looks around because she can't remember where she put it and finally stumbles across her favorite blade.. One, Two, Three cuts have been made.. She smiles as she sees the blood fall.. She can't help it, she feels free when she does it.. She's been dying on the inside but alive on the outside.. Broken on the inside and fixed on the outside, and tonight she couldn't keep herself composed any longer.. She needed this.. Wanted this.. Four, Five, Six.. "Ouch," She whispers.. She sighs with relief as more deep red falls.. Seven, Eight, Nine.. She was already feeling a bit dizzy and went back to her room with the blade.. She striped of her blood-soaked shirt and her pajama pants and slipped on the dress.. She went to her mirror and smiled. She put on the necklace her mother had given her and rolled her neck.. Ten, Eleven, Twelve.. She couldn't help but lose her breathe because she was already so ... Gone..

Answer 2

reminds me so much of me ;-;

it made me cry :(

ily jordan <3

Answer 3

Awe, I'm sorry .-. I wasn't trying to make anyone cry! But ilyt <3

Answer 4

It's otay hun! I needed to release some tears anyways :D

Answer 5

@demonchild99 @fallenangelorchid @LittleRedRiding @cookiemonster2412

c:

Answer 6

Awe, then that's good!

Answer 7

she can make poems 2 <3 and she says shes not perfect smh

Answer 8

Cool long but cool x3

Answer 9

I Liked it I was really nice It made me think about things LOL

Answer 10

@ZairaHernandez what kind of things o_o

Answer 11

Thanks guys :)

Answer 12

lol i likes it to tho i cnt read long things or my eyes act weird but from what i read i liked
:D

Answer 13

Sh emade me think of the poor girl Beautiful on the outside and feeling acky from the inside Kind of reminds me of myself
Perfect from outside
Horrible in the inside.

Answer 14

O.O^MAKES ME SCARED X3

Answer 15

I honestly wrote it because it reminds me of myself.. ^-^

Answer 16

LOL