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OpenStudy (godlovesme):

@Catseyeglint911 i need ur help please :)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

What can I help you with?

OpenStudy (godlovesme):

i have an essay to write but it's not as hard as the other one :) i want u to check my draft and make improvements if u can?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Sure.

OpenStudy (godlovesme):

ok thanks =)

OpenStudy (godlovesme):

@Catseyeglint911

OpenStudy (godlovesme):

@Catseyeglint911

OpenStudy (samanthagreer):

ok

OpenStudy (godlovesme):

We entered the old haunted house on a dare. Fifty years ago the doors had been locked and the windows boarded up after…………… everything seemed fine; quiet and dirty, but otherwise okay. Then I saw something moving in the dark. It all started as a game. It was Saturday night; I was lying down in my bed trying to decide if I should go to Tom’s Halloween party or stay home and watch movies. My friend, Cathie has tried to convince me to come to the party like thousand times. But I refused because I knew my EX is going to be there, since Tom is his best friend. A minute later I heard my phone ringing, it was Cathie. “Did u get the invitation” was the first words that came out of her mouth. “I got it,” I said into the telephone. “Well, you’re going, aren’t you?” she sounded serious. “I don’t think so” “you have to Linda; it will be the craziest party ever. I mean tom is crazy about Halloween. He had a corpse last year; too many people were upset last time...” “Whoa” I muttered “well, that settles it. I’m not going for sure” “oh, come on I know why you don’t want to come to this party” “why?” I asked. “Because Dave is going to be there but you can go to the party and pretend he doesn’t exist.” “I will think about it” I said, and hang up the phone. I told myself over and over to forget about what happened between me and Dave. Even though I was mad about his date with Tanya, but I missed him. “I could wear my old gown or go as Cinderella ...” “I’m not going” I reminded my self. Then I said to myself “I will just be fine if I never see Dave again”. Then I remember my cheerleader outfit. I opened the bottom drawer of my dresser and spread it on my bed. I put it on and stepped in front of the mirror. It has been six years since I last wore this sweater and skirt. At that moment I thought I would be going to the party,” it’s going to be boring to sit here alone when my=friends are out having fun,” I thought. “Welcome to the castle “tom said though his plastic fangs as he opened the apartment doors. He was dressed as a vampire. “Just don’t bite my neck” I told him as I stepped inside. The room was lighted with candles.

OpenStudy (godlovesme):

refresh the page if u see a bunch of question marks...

OpenStudy (samanthagreer):

that is great great job

OpenStudy (godlovesme):

thanks i need more though :)

OpenStudy (samanthagreer):

ok

OpenStudy (godlovesme):

hold on brb lemme write more :3

OpenStudy (godlovesme):

@Catseyeglint911

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