Question

NEW SONG PLZ FEEDBACK

Answer 1

my pulse is dropping
blood running through my veins
im living each day
and you are burning me down
burning me down
burning me down
you taught me wrong
and now you'll pay
im over looking things
im me you are you you cant change that
im so fuked up
your messing with my mind

your such a b!tch
i thought you where with me
i was wrong im never right
im so over it you lost me
i lost you your in my past im in yours
i cant see whats coming next
im fuking over this sh!t
im just gonna walk away now
what have i done


i look away when i go near you
you try talking to me and i ignored
like you have been these last few years
im out of breath im like a demon
i wont stop till i get what i want and that's
revenge on your soul ive raised the glass
im coming back to you
just to say goodbye

Answer 2

@andrewhaze this song is awesome!!!

Answer 3

thx

Answer 4

@quin100 @Mesopretty @Angel_Bear19 @Agl202 @alesia/bailey @Daniellelovee

Answer 5

Wow nice song :) </3 @andrewhaze

Answer 6

It's amazing!

Answer 7

U wrote it to someone? :P

Answer 8

no @Godlovesme

Answer 9

. http://openstudy.com/updates/54ca79f8e4b03ebeb715fd15

Answer 10

http://openstudy.com/updates/54c28c1ce4b0d372e15cb37b

Answer 11

@kmorgan @Mesopretty @quin100 @CallMeKiki @robzilla/u.fig

Answer 12

dude we need to make a band since you can write so many hits man

Answer 13

thx

Answer 14

That ptv picture thoughh

Answer 15

their my fav band

Answer 16

wow that amazing :)

Answer 17

thx

Answer 18

I like the meaning of your song <3

Answer 19

eh your songs alright, i dont like the point of it, i think that its not a powerful song at all, a song should be written from emotion, and this song wasnt you even stated that you didnt write it about anything specific. another thing is that im big on format, this doesnt follow it, and another thing is that you need to gain a bigger and more exponential vocabulary, you used cuss words as fillers because you didnt have anything else to use, but i write songs in about 5 mins and they dont use any... just feedback

Answer 20

OK I appreciate that

Answer 21

anytime man but keep it up, i dont watn You to stop because of one bad comment, you can still go somewhere, my first song got lots of hate, now i average over 50 medals a song so keep it up