Question

poem please give honest responses. If u like it thats awesome but i love honesty because it makes me a better writer

Answer 1

@rochlenadam9

Answer 2

@me10000 @trinitybagwell @cupcakerain @serenacox @~*Ashtyn*~ @ilovewolf @crissy15 @neko_of_hearts

Answer 3

@makaylatracy @Key_.Key @fallenangelorchid @demonchild99

Answer 4

@quin100 @countryboy212

Answer 5

love it more than my own poem

Answer 6

We're all puzzle pieces.
Part of this grander picture,
in which we can only see in fractions,
and even those fractions we can only see
if viewed as the past,
A distant memory.
Yet we some how keep trying to
fit everything together.
To figure out the future before its the past,
but it never works...
instead I'm falling over like dominoes,
Then panic arises
and you're back to the beginning
wondering if your piece is even part of this story
feeling like a block being shoved into a circle
You Knew You NEVER belonged!
So you cut off the edges
trying to be a part of
a corrupted picture
in which You have no invitation in.
And you're left alone again
because even your forgery
was Never good enough...
So you may not be able to see the whole picture,
but you already know where you lie...

Answer 7

^ OH I REALLY like that one <3

Answer 8

@~*Ashtyn*~ thanks girl

@MakaylaTracy omg thats so nice thanks

also i dont know if either of u guys saw my change but i just added a line because i realized that i didnt tie the ending well with the beginning but i fixed it

Answer 9

no prob

Answer 10

Your Welcome !

Answer 11

\[\tiny\color{yellow}{GOOD~JOB!}\] If you can read that you are an awesome wrighter/reader.

Answer 12

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Answer 13

soooooo im a good writer then?

Answer 14

orrr was this like sarcasm or something @Demonx341

Answer 15

lol

Answer 16

i love it

Answer 17

I think it's cool that your song writing is balanced with your skill set. I usually put in 1 hour into a short poem, listen to a lot of music. I think if you go slower you'll escape your balance and find something new.

Answer 18

@serenacox lol thanks u know how i said that sometimes old critics help with new poems well yea thanks because it helped with this one lol

Answer 19

ur welcome anyhting for a freind

Answer 20

@ispike is it not mean it is nice.

Answer 21

@RochlenAdam9 well its not a song because i dont know how to write music lol and as for writing differently i can but im just kinda writing whatever comes out. I write because its a release for me. I write whats bothering me

Answer 22

@Demonx341 lol thanks for clarifying and im glad u liked it

Answer 23

I love these poems, only if they're poems of teens like me lol

Answer 24

@ispike can I buy this from u?

Answer 25

what the rights to the poem? @shelbydancer

Answer 26

I want to use it as a song and ill give u credit in the music

Answer 27

ummm im gonna say no just because i dont really know u and i have trust issues. I mean u can but like dont publish it or anything