Improving Writing with Complex Sentences and Subordinate Clauses.

Question

anonymous · Answer

Add details. For example... why couldn't you sleep?? 
ex: "It was so humid in my room that I couldn't sleep. Instead of tossing and turning for another hour, i crawled out of bed and headed to the kitchen to find something to eat. To my disappointment, the cabinets were bare and the fridge was empty........"

directrix · Answer

Or, maybe:

Restless and with too much on my mind, I could not sleep. Feeling a little hungry, I got out of bed and went into the kitchen to look for a snack. When I opened the cabinet door, I saw an empty cookie package. Still restless and now angry, I decided to go for a walk around ...