When no one understands you, all they do is stare, they don't even have a clue, but just know that I'll be there. You feel that you're all alone, thinking how life ain't fair, Then you start to cry, but just know that I'm there, no matter what the circumstance is, just know that I'm there. c: When you're in your most darkest moments, and no one would would seem to care, with no one to hold you, just know that I'm there. So remember, you aren't alone, even when you're scared.Because I'm here for you, till the day I die, but even then, ''I'll still be there.'' Ily guys! <3
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y is it every time i write a lost poem..someone of my friends take it and always make it ten million times better
omg no shut up x'D yours are WAY better trust me hun c:
noo there not....yall are always ten million times bett....logans was better and so was anyone who based theres off mine...lol....btw ~two thumbs up ~ ~claps hands~ magnific darling~
-.- thx hun
Nice, even when you're dead, your soul will watch upon them, lol I can't rhyme, great job
Awee thx and i like yours actually they're really good C:
okay so i really like it but i felt like it was right there. Like it didnt make me think at all. When i read a book i want it to paint a picture for me but when i read a poem i want to hve to think of multiple pictures. Try saying youll be there without actually saying it. Make the reader think a little. When the audience thinks and figures it out for themselves it has a greator effect. They feel rewarded and it just seems sweeter. Its a good poem. Poetry is about the poet so if u think its perfect than its perfect so if u dont agree with me then just ignore it but just know its there if u want it
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wow.... thx for the advise hun.... I'll take it! @ispike
Awww that was beautiful wifey :) ily <33 :*
ily 2 wifey <3333 ;* @cookiemonster2412
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