Question

Thesis: IQ test scores do not necessarily define a person's intelligence.

Notes:
1. IQ tests do not measure a person's ability to learn a new skill.
2. Interest inventories chart a person's preference for selected activities.
3. IQ tests have been shown to have a cultural bias.
4. IQ tests actually measure a person's knowledge.
5. IQ tests measure a person's ability to reason and think logically.

Answer 1

To improve this paper, _____.

restate thesis in positive, rather than negative terms, OR
discard notes 3, 4, 2; OR
discard note 2, OR
take a more personal approach