Question

roses are red
my arms bleed
my eyes turn blue
when i see u
i cry i break
i fall in your arms till then i will still die alone

Answer 1

@quickstudent @j57 @Clalgee @chainedecho @One098 @Crissy15 @Destinycholie

Answer 2

and at anyone else who i have forgot to tag tag ur peeps if u want bye yall

Answer 3

aweee Makayla <3 Wonderful job!

Answer 4

thank u @ilovewolf

Answer 5

You're Welcome : )

Answer 6

aww

Answer 7

I like it :)

Answer 8

Wow! This poem was very emotional and very visual. I liked it very much! Although it was short, it was very meaningful. Great work!!

Answer 9

I agree with @Clalgee It was a wonderful poem that words cannot describe. :)

Answer 10

@butterflydreamer tell me what u think

Answer 11

wooow! It's so .. depressing but really well written! :) GREAT WORK :D!!

Answer 12

@party_girl tell what u think of this short poem

Answer 13

I think it's great @MakaylaTracy it is very meaningful!

Answer 14

thank u so much

Answer 15

agreed @party_girl

Answer 16

You welcome

Answer 17

@chainedecho check yo messages plz

Answer 18

@demonchild99 i need a friend to talk to

Answer 19

ok.same

Answer 20

go to tiny chat @demonchild99 @party_girl i will send u the links

Answer 21

ok

Answer 22

okay so i really liked this i had to think and it was amazing!!! Anyways i do have a few critics. When u say blue the second time i would do something different to it. Either change the color or emphasize the word. Like caps it or bold even italicized. I know u can do some of that on here but on other sites maybe? My last critic was punctuation i think with punctuation this would b amazing. I loved this poem great job

Answer 23

@quickstudent sorry forgot to tag u

Answer 24

Short and touching. Great job

Answer 25

hey @chainedecho