Despite our social norms of how we should discipline a child,corporal punishment should be criminalized because we have seen in many cases where it can affect a child's cognitive,physical,social and emotional development.can this be used as a thesis statement

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Despite our social norms of how we should discipline a child,corporal punishment should be criminalized because we have seen in many cases where it can affect a child's  cognitive,physical,social and emotional development.can this be used as a thesis statement

inowalst · Answer

Well, for one, corporal has to do with military. Meaning corporal punishments are cruel because in the military, they're strict and mean.. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Corporal So I think, yes, it could be used as a thesis statement. However, that sentence seems to be a bit run-on, dont you think?