I need help writing a body paragraph...
@lolcat
ALright, whats it about?
About advertisements that are directed towards teenage viewers. It wants a report on whether or not this is effective for sales & is it ethical to direct these advertisements towards said teenagers. This is my response: Yes they are because most teenagers are about the name brand, so therefore they are usually effective. Not as much as ethical, because teens are more prone to ads because they want to be socially accepted. Here is my thesis statement: Advertisements aimed at teenagers are very effective; yet unethical. As for teenagers today are all about conforming, doing whatever it may be to fit in and be cool. Such as the focus they have on name brands and the importance they put on their social status with friends.
@kels200105
That's really good! Good job :) Now you just need the body, correct?
That's correct.
Well... How about you give your personal opinion? Would you be more attracted to a advertisement that is made for young adults? Or would you be more attracted to a normal advertisement for all ages?
\[This - is -my- response\] Yes they are because most teenagers are about the name brand, so therefore they are usually effective. Not as much as ethical, because teens are more prone to ads because they want to be socially accepted.
@kels200105 Sorry, I was afk...
It's all good!
So, you can help me still?
@kels200105
Sure! Have you gotten anything else since we last spoke?
Unfortunately, I have not. The above statement is my personal opinion on the subject, like you asked.
Okay, that you could put in the body. Hmm... Trying to think of ideas. Haha.
Take your time, I just hope to be finished before 12 pm. Any help you can give will be greatly appreciated.
Okay! Maybe you could put the difference between advertisements for teens and for all ages. And you can put how you think it will atract teens more than an all aged advertisement. (this is a odd subject to write about, aha)
There wasn't that many options to choose from. Thank you, greatly appreciated. I can take it from here, just didn't know where to start. :)
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