Question

I write songs but I don't know if they are good...
Can you give me some opinions?

Answer 1

Change My Mind

You asked me on a date, I said pick me up at eight
you looked at me, and I still don't see why
you did that to me.

I was so happy! I was so alive! When you found me, you became mine. You held me in your arms on that cold night, But then you found Leah and it made me change my mind.

Maybe your a mindless thinker, maybe you never believed her.

The next week you apologized, you told me it was a mistake.
But baby all I can think about is you not mine. Why did you do that to me, why yyou made me think differently.


I was so happy! I was so alive! When you found me, you became mine. You held me in your arms on that cold night, But then you found Leah and it made me change my mind.

He only wants to hurt me more. He only does it to make me mourn. He doesn't care about me anymore. He doesn't desserve me anymore.


I was so happy! I was so alive! When you found me, you became mine. You held me in your arms on that cold night, But then you found Leah and it made me change my mind


(I wrote this one for my friend who was going out with someone but he started liking someone else and left her for Leah.)

Answer 2

@Gabylovesyou @Angel010 @Angel_Bear19 @Sup???

Answer 3

@Sup??? @shelbydancer

Answer 4

dang this is actually good.

Answer 5

Thank you!

Answer 6

@fallenangelorchid @logan420

Answer 7

This is amazing Lassie!

Answer 8

its really good @kels200105

Answer 9

Thank you guys! I have some more if you want to see them?

Answer 10

@fallenangelorchid @logan420

Answer 11

yeah

Answer 12

in my dreams I watch you sleep

and I wonder if you needed me

and I ponder on my knees

when I'm nervous you are confidemt

when I'm evil you are good

when I'm tired your wide awake

so baby honestly, tell me

Ohh, why

why you gotta be so bad

why you gotta be so bad

for me to know

for me to love

for me to show

Why, why, why, why?

Why ya gotta be so bad?

In my weakness you are strong

in the darkness you stay glow

I the shadows there I weep

for you darling, honestly

Ohh, why

why you gotta be so bad

why you gotta be so bad

for me to know

for me to love

for me to show

Why, why, why, why?

Why ya gotta be so bad?

All my life I have loved you so

but I think you should know

you're bad for me

baby cant you see

you're not the one x3

for me

in your hand you wont find mind

but in my mind you're still be mine

tuck away your dreams of us because

they wont come true

Ohhhhhhh

ohhhhhh

ohhhhhh

ohhhhh

ohhhhh

Ohh, why

why you gotta be so bad

why you gotta be so bad

for me to know

for me to love

for me to show

Why, why, why, why?

Why ya gotta be so bad?

why you gotta be so bad

why you gotta be so bad

for me to know

for me to love

for me to show

Why, why, why, why?

Why ya gotta be so bad?

But baby you know why

your so bad

Answer 13

@logan420

Answer 14

I like it alot