Finding myself Everybody knows who they are Who am I? I don't know who I am I'm broken inside Out here I'm lost I can't find myself Could you help me? I can't remember I can't make a new me my life was ended 3 years ago who is this new person? am I even human? the docs said I'd know who I was later on I would remember I would know how to act, how to speak, not be so crazy it's later what happened?? why am I not full Is mari gone forever? did she actually die? is crissy here to stay? Will she ever know who she is? are the 11 years mari lived, all the memories gone??
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@roz_mar23 aver si puedes contestar una simple pregunta
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Look You Will Find Who You Are When The Time Is Right Trust Me...I Found Myself By Being Depressed
jaja that's funny I find myself more sensitive lately nd with tears in my eyes, I think I'm depressed as well but unlike you I can't find myself
I wanna leave this world, I never thought I'd say that, I'm ruining my own life @wingspansson.Silvera01
no dont say that none of us are promised the next morning just live your life to the fullest who cares if you make mistakes?how else are you going to learn?@Crissy15
@Crissy15
thanks lil bro seems like ur my lil angel
Awwe shucks get back on kik lol and no problem sis anytime @Crissy15
Great poem! @Crissy15
Omg i loved it! a suggestion is u could use some more metaphors or whatever but honestly i dont think u need it. The only thing i would say was i felt like the first two lines should have a comma at the end of them. Because going fast right away is just kind of like whoa whats going on but if u start with a little slower and then start going off on a rantish like thing well i like it. Thats really it. I thought it was amazing something i feel like i would hear a lot but never have if that makes any sense. I loved the poem and i think u should write a monologue to go with it maybe a novel or a play?
@Crissy15
omg im not that good lol unless u help
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