Question

Eighth Grade Week includes the following bowling, a dance a visit to a theme park, and movie, night.

What is the best way to rewrite this sentence?
Eighth Grade Week includes the following: bowling, a dance, a visit to a theme park, and movie night.
Eighth Grade Week, includes the following bowling, a dance, a visit to a theme park, and movie, night.
Eighth Grade Week includes the following, bowling, a dance a visit to a theme, park, and movie, night.
Eighth Grade Week includes the following: bowling, a dance a visit to a theme, park, and movie, night.

Answer 1

What do you think?

Answer 2

There are two choices you can cancel out.

Answer 3

um b dont know but i think b @inowalst

Answer 4

Do you think B is right or wrong?

Answer 5

um dont know @inowalst i just think b but i dont wont to get it wrong

Answer 6

B is wrong. Now, I'm going to help you. B and C are wrong because when you add the word "following" when you're going to list something, you have to add, :

Answer 7

ok so it is a or d @inowalst

Answer 8

Correct. Now from A and D, look at the listing. One of those two is obviously wrong when it comes to listing and adding a comma.

Answer 9

i think a is wrong @inowalst

Answer 10

Nope, A is actually correct.

D: Eighth Grade Week includes the following: bowling, a dance a visit to a theme, park, and movie, night.

At the end, there's no reason to add a comma after 'night'

Answer 11

I meant, before 'night'

Answer 12

ok thanks @inowalst

Answer 13

You're welcome, anytime!

Answer 14

by @inowalst

Answer 15

Bye ^_^

Answer 16

Nice explanation @inowalst :D :D :3

Answer 17

Thank you.