Question

Might make a new song...

Answer 1

Red hair, her eyes were shut closed
Her lips were singing, a song I suppose
she starts to sway knowing its ok
the music playing starts to take her away

(Chorus):
I hope she knows she's a dime
I try to tell her every time
Such a beautiful sight to see
she means everything to me

Sitting on the counter she continues to hum
the remainders of the song though the song is done
I notice the scars on her arms, I witness a new one each day
Everytime that blade comes close I wanna jump in the way

(Chorus):
I hope she knows she's a dime
I try to tell her every time
Such a beautiful sight to see
she means everything to me

Her parents don't agree with the stuff that she does
though its fine with me cuz I love her so much
To most she's not what they'd call a teenage dream
but the me this girl named Jordan, is my queen.

(Chorus): x2
I hope she knows she's a dime
I try to tell her every time
Such a beautiful sight to see
she mean everything to me...

Answer 2

@savanahdawson @Compassionate @chosenmatt @I_Always_Smiling @ilovewolf @iGreen @LeilaJudeh @Librarian @horsegirl27 @hysusonic

Answer 3

omg that was so great! I'm only a new songwriter so I don't have the best opinion but I think you shouldn't change anything because it is so great!!!! Good job

Answer 4

Thanks :D

Answer 5

No problem :)

Answer 6

Wow that's was incredible. Great job, I would definitely listen to that song all the time. Your amazing, keep up the good work. :D :)

Answer 7

Thanks! :D

Answer 8

No problem. Glad to give my opinion. :)

Answer 9

Do you sing the songs you write??

Answer 10

Sometimes xP

Answer 11

If you don't have an account on Soundcloud, then you make one and post you singing your songs. Im sure a bunch of us would listen to your songs. :)

Answer 12

@I_Always_Smiling

Answer 13

great song!!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 14

Thanks :D

Answer 15

:D

Answer 16

Wow! So cute.

: )

Answer 17

Thanks Kitten :D

Answer 18

You're Welcome :)

Answer 19

really good

Answer 20

Hi, saw your song just looking around, and wow that was amazing, simply beautiful. hope to hear some songs from u. :)

Answer 21

@I_Always_Smiling

Answer 22

Its adorable, I love it!

Keep it up ;)

Answer 23

this is really good. Nice job. Keep it up.

Answer 24

Thanks guys! xP

Answer 25

no problem.

Answer 26

@YGHOOTIE

Answer 27

aw i like it ha :) ur pretty good keep it going

Answer 28

Thanks xD

Answer 29

That is so freaking beautiful.. I'm in tears ^-^

Answer 30

<333

Answer 31

You write such beautiful things, you deserve someone amazing ^-^

Answer 32

Hits Jordan with a newspaper "runs away"

Answer 33

@I_Always_Smiling

Answer 34

~Dies of laughter~