Question

I'm thinking of a storyline; please give suggestions of what to add.

Answer 1

Here is my character: http://assets.openstudy.com/updates/attachments/54e10708e4b07f4a24c0192e-greencat-1424033945308-hero4.png

Answer 2

I also made his non-hero form.

Answer 3

I have two stories running and I'll use both- seperately.

Answer 4

1. He is a researching doctor and comes to lab after hours to work on his personal project. He tries to find out if viruses can transmit DNA. So he puts some Cornish chicken DNA in it. He tries to inject the virus into a cat and that's the last thing he remembers. He wakes up on the lab floor with a piercing pain in the eye and an empty syringe in hand. He starts growing wings and a birdie tail and gains some weird energy powers, which is probably from the virus.Since he is a guy, the feathers have a blue-green shine like rooster feathers.

Answer 5

He also tries to hide his new powers.

Answer 6

Ok so as I'm reading it i like it but I need you to slow down your character is suppose to actually look so real and is suppose to be this new mutant but he looks so clean and averge so try and put like some tattoo's on him becuase his is now this spectaulor mutant. then well work on the script. ok

Answer 7

Okay and the second one

p.s theres different breeds of chickens so it wouldnt necessarily like a rooster it would be like a certain breed of rooster

Answer 8

I said a Cornish chicken so he has Cornish rooster feathers.

Answer 9

What do you mean by tattoos? Is it literary slang?

Answer 10

oh my bad lol.
Also this sounds very interesting just curious what type of audience r u aiming for because depending on that should effect somewhat of how u write it. In words of like style and what not

Answer 11

I guess OS would be my audience.

Answer 12

that's where I come in at

Answer 13

oh okay i would try putting on wattpad. um assuming youre not on there? It will copy write your stories so know one can steal them. on here its easier for people to steal your works and take credit for themselves. A lot of times i put it on both

Answer 14

I was thinking of wattpad

Answer 15

yea that'll get alot of viewers and post

Answer 16

HEy question do you already have a wattpad already.

Answer 17

Quick question. If I capitalize my username in wattpad, do I have to capitalize when I log in?

Answer 18

I'm going to make an account..

Answer 19

yes

Answer 20

Oh then I'll keep it lowercase

Answer 21

Yes and post the other one ont their to and when will it premire.

Answer 22

someone already took greencat. I'll wait before I make the account...

Answer 23

If I can think up a name for my second story, that can be my username.

Answer 24

green_catt

Answer 25

2. In the world of the book "Steelheart", people start getting random superpowers one year after a star named Calamity bursts. However, with their powers come greed for power.

Answer 26

^that's the book; now my story:

Answer 27

Also, a group called the Reckoners try to kill small Epics.

Answer 28

slow down

Answer 29

2. He considers himself normal. He found a medical bag in a small cabin and now lives in a small city in the Fractured States where he helps people. But when he starts to get powers, he gets scared that the Reckoners might kill him so he tries to hide his powers.

Answer 30

I need to work out some stuff for the second story such as his weakness.

Answer 31

Well first of all we know he likes to help people so his weakness would be he's scared of his powers simply because he doesn't want to hurt the he help

Answer 32

I really like 2

Answer 33

yea I do to becuase it's basically kinda showing this man who's ran away from his old life of people getting new found power and mutating and he's like this really late mutant because it seems like the virus really took long to travel through his body and this says he can probably handle this virus more than the others did and he could as well be the cure to.

Answer 34

I agree, it needs more. He looks so average dont be afraid to experiment with looks.
make him different from everyone else. those wings in the back aren't the first thing that i see. try to make details that give him an edge stick out more. experiment with colors too. it doesnt need to all be one shade of green--or green at all.

Answer 35

the chest really needs something. be inspired.

Answer 36

also for like character development and stuff ( i know this may sound stupid) try Pinterest. You can look at peoples story boards and the pics can be used as inspiration and give u a good visual.

Answer 37

He is a researching doctor and comes to lab after hours to work on his personal project. He tries to find out if viruses can transmit DNA. So he puts some Cornish chicken DNA in it. He tries to inject the virus into a cat and that's the last thing he remembers. He wakes up on the lab floor with a piercing pain in the eye and an empty syringe in hand. He starts growing wings and a birdie tail and gains some weird energy powers, which is probably from the virus .Since he is a guy, the feathers have a blue-green shine like rooster feathers
Do it like this he’s a doctor whose been knocked out lose all the green go with dark black make his wing bigger and to flow more he’s this muscular man whose a doctor take the goldte off make him taller a bigger armor make him look like a mutant he’s this man who takes different forms use black and blue not my colors but for him great make him have hair that flows make him look real but still be a character not done but their so far.

Answer 38

The second story is set in the story of "Steelheart". It's a genius idea but not mine. I made it because I'm part of a Steelheart community.

Answer 39

I should put more black but the green-blue feathers are due to the shine that comes with Cornish rooster feathers.

Answer 40

I can't change his posture appearance because I used heromachine.com for it.

Answer 41

I wanted his wings to be more like chicken wings- tucked behind usually.

Answer 42

The heromachine has two wing options, angel wings and these twisted wings.