Question

Tell me what you think

Answer 1

I know you've been hurting for a while now
and i don't want to see you fall down
I know you've got your secrets
full of mischief

I hear you scream their name
but their not to blame
I know that you still cry
late at night

you can tell me anything
you can tell everything
even if it breaks my heart
just don't tear us apart

i know you miss them too
if we only knew
just don't play that game
where you act insane

I know you'll see them again
cause this is not the end
you've got to move on
whats done is done

you can tell me anything
you can tell me everything
even if it breaks my heart
just don't tear us apart

Answer 2

this is really good

Answer 3

thanks, i just can't find a beat for it

Answer 4

@~SierraBozarth~

Answer 5

That is AHHHMAZING

Answer 6

thanks <3

Answer 7

This is great!

Answer 8

can i write a beat to it? @NormaValenzuela

Answer 9

thxs, yes you can write a beat to it

Answer 10

Its very good. I never herd anything like it ! <3

Answer 11

amazing

Answer 12

aw thank you, yah i like to keep it original

Answer 13

nice job, though id change your rhyme scheme so that ever other sentence doesnt rhyme. It sorta illregualates a song when its all rhyme. heres an example

let me steal your heart
let me love your soul
let me be your love
let me make you whole

Answer 14

its really cute I like keep singing

Answer 15

thanks for the tip, i will keep it in mind

Answer 16

cool i think i herd the first part before

Answer 17

thank you, and no the first part is 100% original.

Answer 18

i think it should be in the tone and rythm of Wide Awake by Katy Perry.. the words would fit perfectly...

Answer 19

ok cool :D

Answer 20

thanks for the suggestion, maybe i will try it. :)

Answer 21

Omg I loved it
Do u have music too it

Answer 22

you are amazing

Answer 23

@Phebe she is figuring out the music for it... thats what most of the comments are about

Answer 24

No i dont not have music for it., thanks i'm glad you loved it

Answer 25

i loved it great job

Answer 26

thank you @Nahstya for writing a beat to it. Lots of Love <3 <3

Answer 27

oh so thats the song you were talking about on fb, oh okay....it's cool i really like it

Answer 28

yah...Im glad you like it