Question

poem please read and let me know what u think love honest opinions and critics

Answer 1

@Crissy15 @~*Ashtyn*~ @britanyashton @demonchild99 @ilovefood @ilovewolf

Answer 2

@geneticrockhopper247 @kittycat123 @southmini

Answer 3

you need to deeply think what this poem means so it's not for just anyone but it sure is special.

Answer 4

I don’t understand the madness of perfection.
It’s a goal strived upon yet leaves you undone
Like a baseball made of yarn.
We all try and give up
And try and give up
But we all end in this same collision of imperfection.
Because we strive for normality
Another concept created by the human mind.
In which leaves use voiceless
And useless in our minds.
So we create these pictures of how life should go
But instead we end up 6ft under the snow.
Suffocated by barriers we placed around ourselves.
Hoping to look the part.
But instead we find ourselves dead…

Because we used ourselves and abused ourselves.
It was never the world who neglected our favor
It was us…
No, it was me demeaning myself.
Saying what other people had said
As if I could read their minds.
And that’s where self-destruction comes from.
The thoughts that would never rhyme.

Answer 5

@Crissy15 idk if u saw the added part and also im not quite sure what u mean

Answer 6

lol , I'm a deep thinker, I sometimes over think so yea lol and no I didn't see the other part

Answer 7

@Crissy15 so what were u thinking than lol

Answer 8

I'm still thinking and then I know I'll get more puzzled, so right now I think what the poems saying is that perfection is not needed because nobody's perfect and in the added part it then says it wasn't anyone else trying to be perfect, it was ourselves hurting and we were just destroying ourselves, idk I have to write down the meaning revise like a hundred times till my brain says that'sexactly what it means

Answer 9

@Crissy15 it about how perfection and normality are both concepts and a lot of the times we blame concepts on society because thats grow up is being told these things but the truth is we were never directly told that we have to be perfect or normal it was the things that we interpreted that made us feel this way. But interpretation is something we made up in our minds so really thats a little bit our fault and not societies. So the truth is we feel like we have to be perfect or normal because were cutting ourselves down more than anyone else.

Answer 10

omg totally the right meaning
@wingspansson.Silvera01 you need this
@Rosalina_Rose

Answer 11

lol what do u mean by the right meaning? @crissy15

Answer 12

I mean that's what I was tryna say, u took me the cost of getting a headache, this has like uk what a folk tale has a meaning in it, i forgot what it's called
I love this poe,

Answer 13

lol thanks @crissy15

Answer 14

@serenacox

Answer 15

lol it kinda made me laugh

Answer 16

interesting why did it make u laugh? @serenacox

Answer 17

@Ravenn @obviamber @shelbydancer

Answer 18

@ispike idk i just laughed when i was reading it

Answer 19

was it like a bad like this is awful laugh or like a u dont really know laugh or like what?

Answer 20

@serenacox

Answer 21

idk why i laughed it was good though i like it