I need help with coming up with a metaphor for a summer day.. I think i might have one but I don't think its correct..
Well first... What metaphor did you come up with?
I know what a metaphor is. What I kind of came up with is " her smile is a summer day" but thats describing her smile and not summer... Ive asked all of my friends and family and we are all stuck on this.
^ Oh then yes you do need help well... When you think about "a summer day" what do you think of?
obviously sun and warmth. Also how long the days are
Well think about something more specific such as food, activities, show etc. etc.
sunbathing, beaches, parks, concerts, festivals, pools, running, sweating lol
ok so as not to use "as" or "like" give me one of those and summer day and we can come up with a bunch I hope
im still not able to combine anything to sound right
an example : he is the black sheep of the family here the person is the "bad" addition of the family and i didn't use as or like
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ex Summer is a cup of coffee, always making spirits high hoped.
I understand what a metaphor is. I know how to make one. I am just having trouble forming one for summer specifically. ^^^ examples like that help!
good one, your beauty is a summer day? lol cheesy
I guess I will Crissy help you from here…
Thank you all for helping!! I would give you all medals if i could
@CasterGirl there u r talking about her smiled not the summer day
we're done already? lol no prob, english is one of my fav. subject
I mean if I could get a few more examples for a summer day that would be cool..
ok https://www.elanguest.com/content/thereporter/shall-i-compare-poetry-and-metaphors.htm http://examples.yourdictionary.com/examples-of-metaphors-in-poems.html my own: the summer days are my life- meaning this persons life is as long as summer days, i'd use this in a poem to compare it to how long something is like her stress or how she's bored and summer days are her life,never ending lol the sun is my light, the wind my oxygen, a summer day is something to live for- eh idk if this is a metaphor, lol yea it is hard -.- XD
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