Question

help me plz
Which of the following sentences is written correctly?
Tom notices when Heather enters a room because she's usually in a great mood and has a great smile.
Tom noticed when Heather enters a room because shes usually in a great mood and has a great smile.
Tom notice when Heather enters a room, because she's usually in a great mood, and has a great smile.
Tom notices when Heather enters a room, because she's usually in a great mood and has a great smile.

Answer 1

@eclipsedstarhttp
@abbyanna101

Answer 2

What do you think, if you had to guess?

Answer 3

@eclipsedstar

Answer 4

c

Answer 5

No, because it says "Tom notice" instead of saying notices

Answer 6

a

Answer 7

elstic do u know mr.fab

Answer 8

Also incorrect, due to the fact that there should be a pause after the word room.

Answer 9

i have on more guess

Answer 10

d

Answer 11

There should be a comma. It's missing a pause.

Answer 12

D is correct. :)

Answer 13

no

Answer 14

it a

Answer 15

@littletinkpinkers

Answer 16

Really? I think it should be D

Answer 17

Oh ok. Well, what I've learned, there should be a comma...it's emphasizing the next phrase.

Answer 18

it a

Answer 19

eclipsed do u know mr fab

Answer 20

@causticsyndicalist

Answer 21

@charlie7770

Answer 22

The phone rang twice, but shannon wasn’t around to answer it, so her answering machine took a message.

What error can be found in the sentence above?
Change took to takes.
Change twice to two.
Capitalize shannon.
Remove comma after it.

Answer 23

@causticsyndicalist

Answer 24

The phone rang twice, but shannon wasn’t around to answer it, so her answering machine took a message.

What error can be found in the sentence above?
Change took to takes.
Change twice to two.
Capitalize shannon.
Remove comma after it.

Answer 25

The phone rang twice, but shannon wasn’t around to answer it, so her answering machine took a message.

What error can be found in the sentence above?
Change took to takes.
Change twice to two.
Capitalize shannon.
Remove comma after it.

Answer 26

@charlie7770