Can someone proofread my essay?

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anonymous · Answer

Sure.

xxdragoonxx · Answer

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anonymous · Answer

on the first paragraph, you should use a semi colon before "some positive"

kyanthedoodle · Answer

@Heypips And maybe a semicolon before "some negative" as well.

anonymous · Answer

are you sure that's you essay?

anonymous · Answer

@xxDragoonxx

anonymous · Answer

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anonymous · Answer

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xxdragoonxx · Answer

Yeah @ahamed.

anonymous · Answer

In my opinion, I really like you're essay :)

anonymous · Answer

i mean 'your'

anonymous · Answer

it a good essay

anonymous · Answer

@KyanTheDoodle not really... he doesn't need a semicolon there

anonymous · Answer

I think your essay was very good.

xxdragoonxx · Answer

Thank you guys for the input.
Is there something that I need to get better at?
Any suggestions?

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