Question

Can I have help on my argumentative essay plzz?
medal & fan

Answer 1

@MTALHAHASSAN2

Answer 2

@josedavid

Answer 3

Why does the text change size in the middle of the first sentence?

Answer 4

I was tying to put it in the same font and same size for text but it stayed like that

Answer 5

Oh, okay then.

Answer 6

so should i change it

Answer 7

If you can.

Answer 8

the whole thing like does it sound good and is it a argumentatve essay?

Answer 9

It all seems fine to me.

Answer 10

okay thanks what should i add to make it better?

Answer 11

@KyanTheDoodle

Answer 12

I think maybe you should provide the other side to the story. Say something like "While some video games aren't so bad for the society, video games still-" and then continue your argument.

Answer 13

thanks for the help !!!

Answer 14

i made revisions on here

Answer 15

thanks @taylorf2244