Question

poem please give honest replies and critics please let me know what u think

Answer 1

Armer, she's a solider.

She's slow,

But she devours.

As time passes

She turns into a coward.

One more sheet of armer

And she leaves once again.

Another battle,

She'll kill a man.

A wind knocks her down

As she falls to the ground.

The world hears no sound

But with thunder they make her drown

As she falls to the ground.

Another sheet of armer

It's thick and course

So she stands still...

The people surround her,

The ones that she killed.

She waits for a quo, a direction,

A command.

And she imagines herself falling through quick sand...

Out of societies demand.

So she's tired and weary

Of all these chains.

She tries to take off the metal.

What once was for survival

But is now glued to the skin.

And the people all grin

Because it's not her they like to see but the armer covering she.

And she's screwed!

Speaking all alone.

She's basically a clone

And that's what the people see.

So now she's home

And she's drowning all alone...

Answer 2

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Answer 3

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Answer 4

@MilenaSaeger @surryyy @serenacox

Answer 5

@x3_x3 @wingspansson.Silvera01 @Ravenn @I_Always_Smiling

Answer 6

I love it, great job :D

Answer 7

@k_lynn thank u

Answer 8

erm i cnt read all that my eyes will mess with me lol

Answer 9

@x3_x3 okay

Answer 10

you're welcome @ispike :)

Answer 11

wooooooow!

Answer 12

@demonchild99 lol thanks

Answer 13

excuse me for this but damn child your amazing

Answer 14

@MakaylaTracy omg thank u

Answer 15

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Answer 16

Wow that's good

Answer 17

@horsegirl27 lol thanks

Answer 18

@quickstudent

Answer 19

i really liked it.. if you could help me with my question that would be awesome:)

Answer 20

@cxxonicole98 thank u

Answer 21

@TheSmartOne

Answer 22

Beautiful ^_^

Answer 23

@Librarian thanks

Answer 24

it's so awesome :D
I really loved it :*