Question

hey everyone please give me honest opinions and critics. Let me know your interpretation or what u thought!!!

Answer 1

I could have lied…
But I also could have told the truth.
But manipulation seemed like a better excuse.
To be normal?
Of course I never was.
So why this one thing?
Why not be a book
For the world to read.
And I suppose I was,
In a way.
But if I’m any book,
I’m the one on the shelf that opens the secret door.
So people never try to read me
Because they’re more worried about a secret tunnel.
So I sit on a shelf collecting dust in between my pages.

But that’s just a silly metaphor.
Because if I was a book
Then I would probably know the truth about myself.
While the book to the secret tunnel
May manipulate the world as just a prop.
It never manipulates itself.
Because written words are honest.
It’s the ones in my head that I dread.
So I could have told the truth
And I could told myself a lie.
But instead I choose another way.
That make me sit perfectly,
Then crumble,
And die…

Answer 2

@Crissy15 @demonchild99 @makaylatracy @ilovewolf @ilovefood @Librarian @Ravenn @I_Always_Smiling @redridinghood @kittycat123 @serenacox @fallenangelorchid

Answer 3

I really like it, I love it how you're compared to a book ,nice metaphor!

Answer 4

@horsegirl27 @Math&ReadingHelp @MilenaSaeger @southmini @sleepyjess @chainedecho @chmvijay @butterflydreamer @~SierraBozarth~ @~*Ashtyn*~ @geneticrockhopper247 @britanyashton

Answer 5

@Crissy15 thank u and im glad

Answer 6

@rvc @k_lynn @aayushi.somani @cupcakerain

Answer 7

@Reni_love_ELA

Answer 8

Great job @ispike

Answer 9

@k_lynn thanks

Answer 10

Its wonderful you done great

Answer 11

love it

Answer 12

@Raylynngrace thanks

Answer 13

@makaylatracy thanks

Answer 14

your welcome @ispike

Answer 15

great job i liked it

Answer 16

Great job that was really awesome. I like it! It's so well written. And there's just something I like about it but I just can't explain... anyway, awesome job!

Answer 17

I like what it's about. I like the message.

Answer 18

@horsegirl27 thank u so much