Question

Here is a song i wrote
A pillow of tears
a pillow of tears
Is all that you left me
A nighttime of fear
Is all that i know
Wont you come back
Come back to me
CHORUS
Cos i need your love beside me
I need your arms around me
Through the nights.(SLOW)
Ice in your heart
Is all that you gave me
A nightime of tears
Is all that i know
But wont you come back
Come back to me
CHORUS
Cold,cold dreams
Are all that i know now
Nightime of fears
Are all that i have
wont you come back
come back to me

Answer 1

what do you think

Answer 2

Hey thats really good i cant right a 4 line poem thats why i like reading and listening to what other people people can write

Answer 3

thanks

Answer 4

your welcome

Answer 5

Hold on before you close it i'm goin to see if my friend likes it

Answer 6

ok

Answer 7

@Legends come read this song

Answer 8

Im crying no but forreal thats a good song

Answer 9

lol :)

Answer 10

Boom i don't cry but he is probably serious

Answer 11

oh wow

Answer 12

whats wow him really crying?

Answer 13

no you saying that you don't cry

Answer 14

@pooja195 what do you think

Answer 15

Well see i cant say i never cry because every body crys but i refuse to do it when people know i do it

Answer 16

@Mlink1290 @sissyedgar is this a good song

Answer 17

I write songs and sing at places all the time.. I am very popular in the music industry, and I think this is a great song! Would love to hear it! You should make a YouTube channel and post it! Would love to hear!

Thanks,
Maddy Link

Answer 18

Thanks

Answer 19

Boom there's another like not sure why she put it in letter form though anybody else care to share how freakin awesome this song is

Answer 20

Ya you should make a you tube channel maybe if i hear you sing it i'll cry

Answer 21

really good !

Answer 22

I am used to writing letters to people in music formally that is why..

Answer 23

@pooja195

Answer 24

Well if you have a way for us to hear you sing it find me

Answer 25

ok

Answer 26

wow this is heart touching im crying :'( this is beautiful

Answer 27

thanks

Answer 28

i got another song called Come to me Friends

Answer 29

want to see it

Answer 30

Ya definitely