Question

Let me know what you think. This was just a little something that I did in honor of Spring. Aka, my favorite season.

Ode To Spring

When will Spring come?
That flowery, smell good season?
We're waiting for its flowers.
We're waiting for its fun.
While we wait for Spring's
warming sun,
We're shivering in the cold.
They say it's on its way,
But this winter is so bold.
Oh, when will Spring come?
I do not know.
Oh, when will Spring come?
Perhaps while we play in the snow.
They say it's just around the corner,
but every time I look,
I'm finding piles and piles of fluffy white stuff.
So I think I'll read a book.
Maybe reading will pass the time,
so that way Spring will come sooner.
But we can't help but wonder:
When will Spring come?
Oh, when will Spring come?

Answer 1

Please let me know what you think of it :)

Answer 2

@clalgee

Answer 3

i love this. it captures the wistfulness of waiting for spring perfectly :)

Answer 4

Thanks :)

Answer 5

@Destinycholie

Answer 6

i like it

Answer 7

Thank you :)