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OpenStudy (arabpride):

Requesting Feedback! ^.^ I've attached it below in the comments, and would appreciate any opinions/suggestions/criticisms, etc., before I hand it in. It's an analysis on the poem "There Will Come Soft Rains", by Sara Teasdale. Thanks! :3

OpenStudy (arabpride):

~This is the poem~ http://www.poets.org/poetsorg/poem/there-will-come-soft-rains

OpenStudy (arabpride):

Criticisms are welcome c:

OpenStudy (kyanthedoodle):

Just as long as it's the good kind of criticism, and not the "This so sucks and you sucks and I hate you!" :D

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Kyan! What is wrong with you!?

OpenStudy (kyanthedoodle):

Absolutely nothing! HAHAHAHAHAHA As I said. Nothing.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Oh... LOL

OpenStudy (anonymous):

lol he was just saying that it should be good criticism not rude remarks

OpenStudy (inowalst):

Oh! Amazing poem! I really liked the use of words.. How it was short, but it had meaning.

OpenStudy (arabpride):

... lolz.. it wasn't a poem @inowalst ~it was an analysis of a poem cx

OpenStudy (arabpride):

I just realized how many errors there were in that essay. o-o I'll link an edited form cx Sorry~

OpenStudy (arabpride):

OpenStudy (kyanthedoodle):

Wow, you sure had a lot to say considering this was a very short poem to go on. Anyone who can do that deserves a medal. :D

OpenStudy (arabpride):

Thanks, that means a TON! :3 But in a way I was hoping someone would point out something I should add, or remove, etc.

OpenStudy (paki):

@arabpride.. .amazing lines... in love with "And frogs in the pools singing at night, And wild plum trees in tremulous white," <3 nice ..

eclipsedstar (eclipsedstar):

It's amazing! Good job. :D

OpenStudy (kyanthedoodle):

@paki Lol, she did an analysis of the poem. Not the poem itself. :P

OpenStudy (arabpride):

Yes! cx What @KyanTheDoodle said lolzz i didnt write the poem

OpenStudy (arabpride):

but thanks @paki and @EclipsedStar :D

eclipsedstar (eclipsedstar):

^_^

OpenStudy (ilovewolf):

omg it's amazing arab.... ^_^ Great job!

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