Question

I need some feed back on my Prologue for my book? http://www.wattpad.com/106567788-l-a-u-g-h-charecters
Can i get feedback.

Answer 1

@Safire21 @ispike

Answer 2

sure

Answer 3

i think its perfect

Answer 4

thanks @Safire21

Answer 5

@Heypips

Answer 6

@Ravenn i dont have an account on Wattpad

Answer 7

I can't open it? it requires me to log in, which I did, but it only shows like this:

Answer 8

hold on ill get a better link

Answer 9

http://www.wattpad.com/106567788-l-a-u-g-h-charecters

Answer 10

theres two parts this and the prologue

Answer 11

Questions are good for a prologue! Nicely done!

I just wanted to point out some small things:
8th sentence: "We were walking down the hall to writing"
I'm afraid I don't understand this one...

11th sentence: just a typo of "what" :)

13th sentence: you mean "thought" ?

16th sentence: "Normally" and "field"

that's all :) I bet the story will be good! ^_^