Question

Story?

Answer 1

I took one breath and pushed off of the ground. I was soaring through the sky.The wind in my hair,the nice breeze on my face.I looked down and saw the cars and the tiny people.I saw the big library and City Hall.To my sides there were fluffy clouds all around me.
Suddenly,I'm brought back to the real world.
My teacher is standing up front calling my name. She looks as if she's said it quite a few times.
"Well Sara? Do you know the answer?" All eyes are on me including my crush's. I blush and say,"Um, I'm sorry what was the question?" I hear snickers from the right side of the room.
"The question is, When was Thomas Jefferson born?." My teacher glares at me like an evil witch. "I'm sorry Mrs.Craig, I don't know." I burrow deeper into my seat as my teacher makes this weird snorting sound and says, "Ok then,Megan do you know the answer?". Megan turns and gives me an evil grin, "Yes Mrs.Craig, the answer-". She's cut off,thankfully,as the bell rings.

Answer 2

@alesia/bailey

Answer 3

well, when you do the parts where the main person is talking, you should try to avoid putting I blush and said "ect."
it puts it as past tense.

Answer 4

ok..i thought that was a little edgy anyways

Answer 5

lol, other than that I like it.
whats the story about?? whats the plot?

Answer 6

Well..its about a girl that only has a few friends 2 to be exact and other than that shes just an out cast...a shadow

Answer 7

and she likes this guy named jake but they are both to shy to talk to each other

Answer 8

yeeaa...

Answer 9

hmm, you should have some twist, for a climax.
what do you really want this story to be about? how are you going to end it?

Answer 10

idk how im gonna end it ...i havent gotten that far and as for what i really want the story to be about..idk that either

Answer 11

i guess ill end it as she's still the same girl but instead of getting jake her dream guy she finds someone else that seems like an unlikely match i really want this story to be abot a depressed girl finding happiness in some kind of way

Answer 12

and hang on, teacher has nanny cam on >.<

Answer 13

lol ok

Answer 14

i think ill tag a few more people @alesia/bailey

Answer 15

lol, you kinda gave me an idea for a story to write :P

Answer 16

here's a piece of a story do you mind reading it @horsegirl27 @k_lynn @demonchild99

Answer 17

lol really?

Answer 18

I really liked it. I write stories similar to how you do. I have a little bit of an idea of what I"m going to write, but then I write and it builds off my main plot. Great job. :D

Answer 19

yeah, I don't know, something like a fiction book.
like a dream world thing and I don't know but yeah.

Answer 20

Wow this is really cool! I like it a lot! I feel like it's a book and this is the first page. I would really want to read the book! It's so great and I just want to keep reading!

Answer 21

lol yea i just started writing and it came together @k_lynn

Answer 22

@horsegirl27 haha really i mean i don't think its that good but Thanks!

Answer 23

see @koolkat13
you got nothing to worry about, people love it already :)
it shouldn't always matter if others like it as long as you do.

Answer 24

I'm the same way.

Answer 25

Thanks guys :)

Answer 26

oh @koolkat13 it is that good I'm not kidding. and I'm picky about what I like to read :P

Answer 27

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@horsegirl27 haha really i mean i don't think its that good but Thanks!
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Are you kidding? It's really good. Don't put yourself down.

Answer 28

lol @horsegirl27 thank you so much and @k_lynn thank you as well im used to people just saying..yea its fine and not meaning it..and ive oly showed my family my stories

Answer 29

only*

Answer 30

I don't show anyone mine. Well except for people from the internet.

Answer 31

Well then keep showing them to us. They might just be bored with ur stories because they always read them. While we are hungry for new stories and happily read them. And this was so good we truly mean it. It's so interesting! Write more!

Answer 32

@k_lynn wow. " I don't want my friends and people who are close to me read my stories but I let random people online read them" sounds smart XD

Answer 33

thanks a lot guys i think i will show you guys more often and ill write more

Answer 34

lol

Answer 35

Ikr! People from the internet don't know me. So if they don't like my story, it don't matter cuz they don't know me

Answer 36

I'm brilliant XD. jk not really.

Answer 37

lol youre an awesome story writer so you kinda are brilliant lol

Answer 38

I agree! XD

Answer 39

and everyone's here..no ones saying anything ..*awkward silence*

Answer 40

lol

Answer 41

lol thanks

Answer 42

to bad i can only give one medal -_-

Answer 43

I just get so busy and I forget about my stories.

Answer 44

i have tons of stories but like i only show a few of them to my family and none to the world till now

Answer 45

I'm pretty much the same way. But I show mine to my friends and not family.

Answer 46

If u make another tab and open OS u can give another medal XD

Answer 47

yea it didnt work o.o

Answer 48

oh it worked for me

Answer 49

well..im not choosin favorites i have no favorites haha so uh imaginary medals for all yalls

Answer 50

:P

Answer 51

thx <3 :)

Answer 52

Imaginary medals are better than real ones :)

Answer 53

your welcome <3 and yea they are lol

Answer 54

In some ways:) they make it so everyone gets a medal but if u were raising ur SS(idc about mine) then they would be unhelpful. But i think they r better

Answer 55

lol yea yur right @horsegirl27 well im off to write more of my story and get math help..byes

Answer 56

ok:P bye

Answer 57

so i went to get math help and..just look in the math chat...

Answer 58

@horsegirl27 and @k_lynn

Answer 59

lol

Answer 60

That's what happens when you go to the chats.

Answer 61

yea...idk why i do

Answer 62

That's why I'm never in the chats.

Answer 63

yea Smart lol