Read the sentence and answer the question that follows:

In the event that you spy a tornado, go and seek shelter in a dark room that has no windows.

Which statement best describes how this sentence can be made more concise.

It has a phrase that can be converted to reduce wordiness.
It has a modifier that may be eliminated because it does not add any meaning.
It has a redundant phrase that may be revised to eliminate repetitiveness.
It has a redundant pair that may be revised to eliminate repetitiveness.

Question

Read the sentence and answer the question that follows:

In the event that you spy a tornado, go and seek shelter in a dark room that has no windows.

Which statement best describes how this sentence can be made more concise.

 It has a phrase that can be converted to reduce wordiness.
 It has a modifier that may be eliminated because it does not add any meaning.
 It has a redundant phrase that may be revised to eliminate repetitiveness.
 It has a redundant pair that may be revised to eliminate repetitiveness.

bookworm14 · Answer

I would say: 

 It has a redundant pair that may be revised to eliminate repetitiveness. 

I am not 100% sure, but that is the one I would choose...