Question

Feedback please? I'm going to try to post up a different poem every Friday and Wednsday... they are originals and tell me what you think about them in the comments.

Answer 1

I got dared to write a poem titled IT so her it is...
It
It is something that makes you blush.
It is something that seems easy,
But it's actually really hard.
It is something that will make you laugh,
Or it is something that will make you cry.
It is something that is hard to find,
But when you have it, you have to guard it.
It is something that everybody wants,
But many take for granted.
It is something than can trample over your heart,
But gets you nowhere.
It is somthing that we call, "LOVE"!

Answer 2

Please tell me what you think about it...

Answer 3

I liked it, but I feel like saying "it is" sounds weird.
Maybe instead of "it is" you could combine them for "it's".
Other than that, it was very nice and meaningful!

Answer 4

i like it very nice

Answer 5

the ending made me smile :) awesome poem!

Answer 6

@mindie321 @koolkat @mathrulezz Thanks

Answer 7

yw :)

Answer 8

yw :)

Answer 9

thats really good

Answer 10

i wish it was Wednesday already lol :)

Answer 11

@Ravenn Thanks!
@koolkat13 lol it's okay... Wednesday is coming soon

Answer 12

it tis lol

Answer 13

Tomorrow is Wednesday!!! @koolkat13

Answer 14

it is!!!