Question

To any wattpaders,

I am working on my overall writing. I would like some people to critique my story development. I would like to know if my writing is strong in storytelling.

Here's the Link:
http://www.wattpad.com/myworks/32360077-and-alone-we-die

Answer 1

ooh ,I'll take a look, I understand how hard it is to write a story and see your own mistakes :)

Answer 2

@cecormier Thanks! Means a lot! I am not really looking for grammar issues but more on looking on how to make my story more original. With my own flair and fire to it.

Answer 3

it might take a while but I'll leave my critique's in the comment section if that's okay with you?

Answer 4

Sure thing! Anything helps!

Answer 5

good :), you;ll see me in your comments then :D

Answer 6

Like I said, I just want to improve more on the story telling aspect. I will correct the grammar issues myself later. If the story line seems iffy or something is missing, let me know!

Answer 7

I hate leaving plot holes or things that don't make sense. (Ex. two people fell asleep and they run away from a random dinosaur vegetable monster.)

Answer 8

lol, I'll tell you when I think something is missing, and if I know what, I'll tell you some things you can do :) after all the best books are written by one person, but has dozens of people butting in saying you should do this or that

Answer 9

I want my story to yes, leave mystery and questions. But I want it to go smoothly and make the reader want to read more and ask more questions. It is getting emotion out of my readers, but I want to make sure it is the utmost best I can do.

Answer 10

Thank you so much! I hope what you find is original and hopefully and interesting piece!

Answer 11

*an

Answer 12

haha, I like to write story's where the reader becomes emotionally connected to the character's and then they feel like nothing's gonna work out but then some of it does and some doesn't, I like it to be realistic

Answer 13

and yet my story's are based on fairytales

Answer 14

Same here! I like mine to be realistic and have the reader get attached. (you'll see it in the comments) I like sci-fi stories. But hey, I would like to check out your work sometime!

Answer 15

awesome, I hae to update mine, I only have the preface but I plan to do that this week, my username is the same as on here

Answer 16

Same here! I like my name to mean something. How this one came to be is a pretty long and interesting story! But I will save that one for another time, if you want.

Answer 17

that sounds good :) mine is just my actual name, but for my internet name my last name comes from my fave book